And that's... Chapter 1, folks. This was a fun page. I missed having Eva and Phoebe interact.
No real game notes for this page, but some commentary
As of making this page I got a new computer with a much better screen! I don't expect it to make a big difference in my art, but the colors are so much clearer now.
That Caterpie (my viridian forest catch) will get a proper introduction in a little
Also I imagine Phoebe didn't mean to slam the car door but she did and made things seem 50 times worse than they are
I am going on a short hiatus to make up for the time I spent developing chapter 2, making references, and taking a break due to school this past fall and winter. I'll make a more formal post later , but I'll probably be back in the fall. Thanks for reading as always!
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Those first three panels made me laugh out loud! Who wouldn't want to squish a charmander if they had one?
Also, I just read through this comic and it is beautiful! I'm absolutely in love with your art style! Can't wait to see more!
the caterpie in phoebe's hair is just..aaaah. it's big beautiful dumb eyes and how it's stuck in her curls it's so cute
bwahahaha!!! i had to go and see if i could tell which page caterpie was grabbed and looked like 9 around when she threw off the weedle... that amuses me, as does the squishy charmander!
can't wait to see whats next
well you gave us 2 teeny tiny hits after the 'encounter' just the barest hit in her hair, that could almost be mistaken as hair you didn't color right... another teeny hint right before going into the cafe on 10, 4 bigger and one more teeny on 13, before finally pulling it out on 14, i say all around, well done!
.....yes i'm crazy enough to go back and double check things to satisfy my curiosity
ok, i'm done now, peace out
gosh I forgot to comment earlier but your backgrounds and colors are really just SUBLIME and vibrant and...wow! the character body language/poses and things are delightful and really tell a lot about their personalities, too. I cant wait for chapter 2!