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Yumi at the Beach (Requested) (WIP - INKS) by mistformsquirrel Yumi at the Beach (Requested) (WIP - INKS) by mistformsquirrel
An update to my current piece!  It's coming along, albeit very, very slowly!

I'm pretty pleased with where it's gone so far though.  I need to do some clean up yet, improve a few lines here and there, and then of course colors and shades, but on the whole I'm quite happy, which is a rarity.

< ._.> Please do let me know what you think and where I could improve. (The white space is going to be a sandy beach and there will be water, but I want to ink it in blue rather than black - may do that for the sand as well, we'll see if I go back and change that.
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spiritplumber Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016
Wow, shiny! (Hi from the Slacktiverse)
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mistformsquirrel Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016
Ohai Spiritplumber <^,^>/ didn't know you had a DA account.  And thank you <^.^>;  I am learning!  Slowly. >_<;
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Caraig Featured By Owner May 27, 2016
Oh, very nice!  It's coming along well!

I think the only thing that jumps out at me is the perspective of the second character compared to Yumi and the wall.  It seems a bit off?
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mistformsquirrel Featured By Owner May 27, 2016
Yeah >.< She looks a bit... small, frankly (Yumi is supposed to be 4'11", Ame, the seated character, is supposed to be 5'4")

It's a longrunning problem of mine in multicharacter art... I don't like putting people too close together, which... actually ends up looking unnatural, as realistically Ame in this is farther back than Yumi and a bit of intersection would show that. >.< Also maybe a slightly angled pose instead of dead on.  I may yet try to fix it before colors, though we'll see if I have the energy.
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Caraig Featured By Owner May 27, 2016
Perspective is tricky!  It's probably the hardest 'technical' thing to get right in art, and the one thing that most often goes awry.  Take it slow; do the art you enjoy nd focus on the technical stuff later. =)
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mistformsquirrel Featured By Owner May 27, 2016
Hehe, well I need to fix her face as well <,< I just realized.  I'm going to blame including a sucker (I normally have enough difficulty just making a plain face, I decided to up the ante this time ><)
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