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The Story With No Name Pg. 1 by mistformsquirrel The Story With No Name Pg. 1 by mistformsquirrel
Page 1 of The Story With No Name.*

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*edit* That weird line thing isn't showing up in my file; it doesn't appear to be anything I can fix. Strange. If I can figure out how to get rid of it I will.

*edit 2* I've altered the text bubbles to make them more readable. I tried to get rid of that line, but as I said before, it's not in the file itself, it's some weird interaction with DA's upload system. (Extra weirdness bonus points: I uploaded Page 2 in this slot as a test... no line. But when I uploaded the new version of Page 1 again? Line was back. What. The. Fark.)

I'll keep thinking about how to get rid of that line. If you've got ideas, let me know.

*Working title, subject to change.
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Richardiovascular Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011
Oh Snap! You're paneling dood?!!

Still have yet to get that part of the craft down.

Good stuff Squirrel bud.

;D

-R
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mistformsquirrel Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011
Yeah, I launched my (very very slow to update) practice webcomic in May I think it was... I'm getting maybe 2 pages a month, if that <~_~> but I'm hoping to speed it up soon.

I've found paneling *much* easier now that I've been using my tablet though; since I can just abuse the square tool most of the time. That said I I want to try some oddball hand-drawn ones eventually, but that's down the line a ways. (I've always liked those panels that look like a chunk of page has been ripped out and the panel is somehow in the rip. >.>)
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Murasaki99 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Excellent first page! I really like their expressions. :love:

Up the size of your dialog font... it'll help your readers a lot. :nod:
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mistformsquirrel Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2011
Yeah, Page 2 should be a LOT more readable - I had no idea what I was doing with dialogue balloons on page 1 <x,x> but I came across a nice tutorial about making em in GIMP; and if it works to my satisfaction I'll go back and use it on this page too. (Hopefully re-uploading it will kill that weird line across the page too. >.<)
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DKeith2011 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
Good start misty.
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mistformsquirrel Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
Thanks man <^_^>b Hoping to have installment 2 ready by next Wednesday; though like I said in the journal for today; I'm not technically keeping a schedule. Really excited about this project though >.<b
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