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Mirta Schultz
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Your writing is so smooth, a combo in feel of a touch of noir and a more poetic sense, lyrical. This feels like a chapter in a novel, though, rather than a short story, as it feels as if there is an unfinished quality, as if it is supposed to go on. I think what it's missing is dialogue. A bit less internal monologue and more of the spoken would strengthen it, I believe. If it's to stand alone, then something else needs to factor in. As a chapter though, I like it. I truly admire how well you fashion the voice here. Lovely.
For some reason, it makes me think of a lonely Rapunzel stuck in a tower. I love the melancholic, dreamy mood.
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Wow. I can FEEL that pain.
Torment
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Gorgeous dragon. I love blue (and white, too) dragons.
Sky dragon