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Tranquil Fury by Mirerose Tranquil Fury by Mirerose
I dunno.
I sat down and said to myself; draw anything. Anything at all.
This happened.

I've never asked for critique before... Should I?
Digital is still a little foreign to me... and I do like the idea of getting better...
ああも.

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Critique by Paradoxigent Jul 4, 2013, 5:35:37 PM
The first thing to take note is how much the picture "moves". Basically, depending on how the lines are displayed, you create a certain flow as to how a viewer looks at it. Since there is plenty of negative space, the first thing that is commonly looked is the face. From then off, you understand the mood, you take note what emotions are present, and you start thinking more of the setting overall, which I believe you have captured perfectly. And when she is looking off to the left, the viewer also focuses more on the left which then they see how well the hair cooperates with the flow, making it recenter the viewer back to the face. It is quite a cinematic display which I believe makes many to not notice the few flaws with the picture.

Briefly stating these flaws, the bit of hair on the lower right disrupts the flow of the image and when noticed stands out a bit. Another note, the tear that runs down her face does not go over the line art of her chin, but this could also be forgiven as maybe a style choice since the shading of it fits well to not distract from the main focus.

While there could be many similar scenarios that this female is in with many other works, the uniqueness of the style and the choices in execution is what makes it stand out. The way she is behaving suggests more than what the picture only shows, leaving the imagination to the viewer. That is a huge plus.
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Critique by Scarlee-chan Jul 21, 2013, 7:12:56 AM
Wow, wow, wow...this is so...mystifying~
Those eyes...they hold such power...such wonder...you can really tell a person by their eyes but I'm completely stumped by this character's eyes...I can't see through their eyes at all...

Your originality is quite amazing. Although I have seen pieces familiar to this, I have to say that the techniques that you've used are really original! I love this!! I can't wait to see more like this!! I am so going to have a browse through your gallery! You look like you could become a really amazing artist!! Good luck! x

:happybounce: keep up the good work! :happybounce:
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rosheruuu Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love the colours used and her expression! This so awesome!
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:icondemyier:
Demyier Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Student Artist
This is gorgeous D: jaw drop 
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:iconchaostrevor:
ChaosTrevor Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This is a really good drawing that you did
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:iconliomnie:
Liomnie Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good job!
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:iconstam4o:
stam4o Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Good, like the look and also how the hair mixes with the background.
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:iconzenkai97:
zenkai97 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014
just marvelous
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SayuriSakurai Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like the eyes!! OwO
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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Professional
Thank you! ^^/
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BrianJMurphy Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014   Digital Artist
Very well drawn face. :)
It's pleasing to look at and the expression is full of emotion. A mix between determination and sadness.
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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Professional
Thank you very much! ^^
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:iconbrianjmurphy:
BrianJMurphy Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014   Digital Artist
Welcome :)
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:iconinawolfsimage:
InaWolfsimage Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This looks awesome!
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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Professional
Thank you! ^^/
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:iconminaminoshuuichi:
MinaminoShuuichi Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014   Digital Artist
this looks really cool :) the colors and the light effects are awesome :iconthumbsupplz:
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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Professional
Thank you! ^^/
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:iconminaminoshuuichi:
MinaminoShuuichi Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014   Digital Artist
You're welcome :aww:
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xXRisianaXx Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love that the focus is on the eye because of the color :)
For me I would just say that you should add more details to the eyes,
to make them look more lively.

Still good work :)
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kev19180 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Really moody, I love this type of lighting. It also works well if you slowly work the black into the face.
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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Professional
Thank you, IKR, I've been doing a lot of that lately, playing with light/shadow in the face. Something very captivating about the process :}
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:iconkev19180:
kev19180 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Yep I completely agree :)
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:iconreaperrr1:
Reaperrr1 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It has a really nice feel the eyes are a little bit weird for me but its unique anyhow :D 
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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Professional
Haha, thanks! xD
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:iconcaen-n:
Caen-N Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Professional General Artist
powerful  look in those eyes.
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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Professional
Thank you!
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DenaHelmi Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
really good :)
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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Professional
Thank you! ^^
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:iconnor-renee:
nor-renee Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Professional Artist
Wow, I love this! It's very well done! :D
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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Professional
Thank you so much! ^^
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Artsouls143 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Professional Filmographer
awesome
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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Professional
Thanks x)
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Drimr Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well... this is pretty fucking good for something you drew just out of your head. Also, it's pretty :iconcuteeyesplz:
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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Professional
Aha! Well thank you very much! xD
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Elitegengar Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
very cool!
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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Professional
Thank you! ^^
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Bimmi1111 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
The eyes really stand out, really pretty color
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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Professional
Thank you very much! ^^
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MorfiouzArt Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Professional General Artist
Simple and strong. The emotion come through clear without over complications. Great work, love it.
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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Professional
Thank you very much! ^^
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:iconsugarmints:
sugarmints Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like how you did the hair!
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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Professional
Thank you! :D
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:iconb-r-benton:
B-R-Benton Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
The eyes on this are very intense.  Very nice.
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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Professional
Thank you! ^^
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PhenixMightheart Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
wowwww
lovely
best
awsmmmmm
sorry thats all i have
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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Professional
Thank you xD
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:iconkatay:
Katay Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
love her eyes:D
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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Professional
Hooray :3
Thank you!
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Skyw1nd Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really good!!!
I love her eyes and the way her hair-- :iconthisplz:
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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Professional
Lol, thanks so much! \;v;/
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ninjahedgehog20 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014

me: it wasn't me plz ;A; i didn't touch the cookies


love it :dummy:

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:iconmirerose:
Mirerose Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Professional
xd lmao, are you suure? ;D
Thanks so much \^v^/
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