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Stages of Love

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Published: February 19, 2019
"Ask me what I love."
"Alright. What do you love?"
"I love the spark in a mountain lake as the sun peeks between the peaks.
I love the whispers of the wind in the branches of majestic trees.
I love the scent of old books, the repeating tales stronger than time.
I love life."
"Oh, me too! Will we meet again?"

"Ask me what I love."
"What do you love, love?"
"I love you. You are my life."

"Ask us what we love."
"Okay, so what do you love?"
"We love the spark in our daughter's eyes as she watches a mountain lake.
We love the whisper of her feet as she runs between majestic trees.
We love the scent of her hair as it falls over the pages of an old book.
We love her more than life."

© 2019 MirachRavaia
For the "Love Drunk" prompt of CoreMembers

Our daughter Linda
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She is beautiful and so is your work. :heart: 
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This poetry is the sweetest I ever read, yet very powerful :3 your daughter should be very lucky ;)

ps: thank you for the fav! Your gallery is fantastic :D
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