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If Pages 100-103 aren't planned out, I think Messy should question why Zenton is "Protecting" Sans, to which Zenton tells Messy that the "LuxrayBlast" he thought he heard was just his plushie, he's brought to the castle before. Messy isn't listening and calls Zenton a liar, then attempts to use "Take Down" back, but, misses Zenton AND Sans, striking Pearl in a blind rage. (Page 100)
Pearl luckily just gets knocked back and she snaps out of her "out of it" state, at first blaming Messy, then hears Zenton trying to talk Messy down. Realizing Messy is acting like this because something is wrong. Pearl intervenes with the fight. (Page 101)
Pearl begs Messy to stop and think, telling him one wrong move will cause him to fall in lava. Messy, in a fit of rage, yells at her to "Shut Up" and he's trying to get justice for his trainer's "death". Pearl, confused, asks about the plushie, to which, Messy, enrages says "My Master is dead and both of you are obsessed with a plushie". (Page 102)
Messy charges at them again, misses and slips at the edge, snapping out of his rage crying out for help not wanting to meet the same fate as his master, when out of the blue, Scar does some wall kicking and saves Messy. (Page 103)