As me i am really not that critical, i just know what i like, i know what i dont like. your model is very beautiful the slight smile, does a mental thing where you wonder what she was thinking, you capture the image very well , personally i think i would have used an off white for the bottom , just to break up the back wall and matress. Not to mention would have added more color, other than that maybe just a touch bigger smile and a slight angle looking more towards the camera , she has beautiful eyes why not use them to your advantage
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