I want to read it to the end and if you are worried that its too fluffy...well the road the plot is going I dont really see it. But let me tell you its not as fluffly as you think. The author that de-activated last year, that I was a big fan of, her ZADR stories where so CORNY, and GOOEY and OOOWW LOVEVY DOVEY.... But they were good stories it amazed me how sweet Zim and Dib where to each other like Honey and Dear waaaaay off but still enjoyable But TBW seems to me to have a good amount of both in it already. Like the scene with the dogs its very IZ but the scene after is sweet then again its ruined in the IZ style. Because of stuff like that it seems right. No matter how lovey a scene is to me it feels like it has a serious undertone and that helps it keep it IZ-esc. There are also some authors in my opinion that try too hard to keep it IZ style that it doesnt even feel like ZADR because it becomes too sadistic or mean spirited. TBW to me feels fine fluffy but has some serious undertones, then again that is just my opinion. no matter what you want to do though I cant wait for an update.