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Rchezem and Dahlem |Comission|

By MichelVictor
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godcursed's avatar
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

The static artwork is good, The cross on the left characters chest seems misaligned to his stance. The problem may just be the cross appears flat and the chest is curved yet there is no depth indication showing the cross is an object attached to the chest plate.
I have trouble from a technical stance seeing both sheathes on the left character being over the left hip. While this is done, in almost all cases the swords are of different sizes and the smaller blade is more horizontal. For two large swords this would be awkward.
The sword on the character on the right over his left hip is too far forward for balance.
Movement. The swords lead the movement up and down and in most normal cases it should lag behind the body. As the movement is vertical and the shots are going wide horizontally it does not seem natural that they would be wrist directed for this motion.
Clothing movement on the character on the right should be impacted by the gun-play and that should be forward and back with the movement of the shoulders. The shoulders do not seem to move as much as the gun kick or the clothing motion suggests. No head motion when the shoulders are moving asynchronously also seems odd.
The image includes sound and there is no control on the image to easily adjust or mute it so I would lower the volume or include a control.
The background and especially the floor effects are good, the gradual hazing to the distance is well done.
Lightbringer2025's avatar
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Hi Michel,
It would have been better to have the guy with swords, moving and deflecting the bullets with his swords with the same type of slow motion for a better effect than him standing almost static. Also the clothes of the guy who is firing the guns, looks like as if waving in unison in some kind of liquid.
Further studying natural flow of fabric will help you immensely in this field.
Other than that, a great concept and execution!

And I hope my comments come across as positive critique and encouragement to improve your animation skills than anything else.

redsquirrel0249's avatar
Anyone else think the pistols look like Jango Fett's pistols?
Fir3Fly101's avatar
Looks like no one's messing with this guy
MichelVictor's avatar
Thank you for all comments haha
ihadtopickaname's avatar
Amazing! You used After Effects to do the animating? That is awesome, I'm learning it right now, and I hope to make something like this one day XD
Also, is the guy with a guns wearing the Fullmetal Alchemist uniform??
MichelVictor's avatar
Thankyou! Yes After effects, I don't know but the comissioner gave me a animate reference so probably yes. I never watch it, so I can't say it for sure.
Esu341's avatar
no auto aim?! @_@
5tarex's avatar
Sensacional cara! :D
Gostei muito da música, me lembrou jogos clássicos e combinou muito com a cena.
MichelVictor's avatar
Lets talk about that on monday through Skype.
IzzyMarrie's avatar
Also, since we will talk Monday through skype, I'll go ahead and delete those two messages like I promised
IzzyMarrie's avatar
Okay.  Thank you.
Kmon13's avatar
THis looks great!
Kmon13's avatar
You're welcome.
zerotzallander's avatar
The only thing that comes to my mind is that the pistol guy is pretty bad at aiming. Otherwise I like this animation! :)
MichelVictor's avatar
haha Thank you!
helderm's avatar
Ruim de mira. :P
octavariumSK's avatar
Minha reação assim que abri o link: ''...Carai.''
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