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Confined by school

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This is the first picture for my AP 2D portfolio. The theme is "confinement" which will be portrayed in various ways through fashion photography.

This photo represents how I feel about school. Although it is necessary to learn, I'm not an advocate for the institution. There are more effective ways to attain knowledge rather than within the confines of school and in the presence of its lovely attendants.


Taken in my bedroom with 3 tungsten lights.
Image size
3888x2592px 8.07 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 40D
Shutter Speed
1/20 second
Aperture
F/6.3
Focal Length
28 mm
ISO Speed
320
Date Taken
Jan 8, 2009, 5:21:07 PM
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

First, you know I love your work, and I like this series "Confinement". The colors work together, strengthening it. The circle works as a part of the series, like the other circles in the series. I like that this one is dark, with browns, instead of the usual lighter color pallet. I believe you could make this a stronger photograph; to be about confinement at school, maybe you could make it look like a library instead? A suggestion. This is your weakest in the series. it has nothing to center your eye. Maybe less books? But still a dynamic photo.