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This is a one page comic done for a slovak mag. The theme was "touch".Thanks for watching!

done in Photoshop
c&c very welcome
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:iconwrathion9:
this was really really sad, but in the same time it was sooo sweet, they loved each other so much they could not live with out each other. and for the last thing they did was die together in their arms in one last hug one last touch, it's really a great pic i think it should be a daily deviation cause

1. its a sweet yet sad pic
2. the coloring its great
3. it has a nice and little story line to it (i know there are no words put one pic can tell a story in its self)
4. you can tell you put in a lot of work in it

so i say to you this is really great and i hope it becomes a daily deviation
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Critique by Chanethedemongirl Dec 24, 2010, 9:39:46 PM
This piece is sentimentally moving to me.

The atmosphere in these two Creatures are in along with many others of their species are contained in a cold soulless void it seems. To see both the male and female are suffering in sadness makes me long to comfort them.

To see that they find a glimmer of hope in their tears of misfortune and to see that they make a desperate escape from each others cells only to end up back in despair. Only this time where I see thats where they end up is broken on the floor, made me want to cry because its was so emotionally moving and heartfelt. I love that that was the only thing they wanted to in the end was be together. :iconbigheartplz:

Another feature is that I love how they look a an alien race, from the eyes to how they seem to move about. I enjoyed this thoroughly :aww:
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:iconpezito:
Pezito Featured By Owner May 4, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
It may be old but it's still good! Very nice idea and storytelling, just a few pics are enough to evoke strong emotions. Very good job. :)
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:iconspicychinesepenguins:
Wow....I actually teared up at the end. A very special and emotive piece of art! 
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:iconbabou-shka:
Babou-Shka Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
Wow! The colors, the story, everything is done in an elegant and touching way.
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:iconderpidder:
DerPidder Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
A masterpiece...
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:icongorab:
Gorab Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
as sad as lovely
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:iconfoggyglasses:
FoggyGlasses Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WOW ! SUPER NICE !
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:iconfufucuddlypoops1:
fufucuddlypoops1 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I loved the color choice. and, atleast they ended up together. Love it so much!
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:iconmichalivan:
michalivan Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you! I'm glad you like it
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shugertiger Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!
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:icongrim-reapers:
Grim-Reapers Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011  Student Artist
is a little confusing... but nice drawing yo
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:iconinvader-luvergirl8d:
invader-luvergirl8D Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011
wow. thats cool, gross (in a cool way), and sweet at the same time. i love it!!!!!! also sad... but thats what makes it so good.
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:iconfree-spirit-wolf:
Free-Spirit-Wolf Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2010
This should be an animation! =O
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:iconfalloutking1000:
falloutking1000 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
its wierd that they are aliens or something, but it is very beutiful in its own way.
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:iconshortandfun:
ShortAndFun Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This was awsome but they look like embryo to me :O_o:
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:iconxdarkxthexwolf:
XDarkXTheXWolf Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010
This is very touching.
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:iconemil-does-shit:
Emil-Does-Shit Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
OHGOD EW. THATS GOOD BUT UM...ew
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:iconravenwingquill:
RavenWingQuill Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010
Really cool <3
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:iconxenocidaender:
XenocidaEnder Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2010  Student Filmographer
That's so...emotional... I really like it
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:iconchaonea:
Chaonea Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
The sheer emotion of this piece, without words or anything recognizably humanoid, is breathtaking!
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:iconblackroseshadow:
BlackRoseShadow Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
lovely concept! :heart:
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:icondaretobeforgotten:
Daretobeforgotten Featured By Owner May 3, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
How sad! So bittersweet.
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:iconfantasystar101:
fantasystar101 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
so lovely :heart:
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:iconragnhildur:
ragnhildur Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2010
this is actually very very emotional, your colours convey the sadness i feel in this... it's lovely. and sad. but mostly lovely. c:
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:iconfiruz7:
firuz7 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow
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:iconfiruz7:
firuz7 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Skvělé !
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:iconjoldi:
joldi Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009  Student Digital Artist
aaqaw that's really cute :)
and it look great too :)

i love it man!! keep up the good work :D
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:iconlosume:
losume Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2009  Student General Artist
wow. :wow: that is awsome.
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:icondevcager:
DevCageR Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Tohle je prostě dokonalost sama. Už jsem na to narazil několikrát, ale nikdy jsem neutrousil koment :peace:;)
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:iconrufus-rag-and-bone:
rufus-rag-and-bone Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2009
Very imaginative

Awesomely coloured too .

I love it .
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:iconheyriel:
Heyriel Featured By Owner May 17, 2009  Student Digital Artist
thats so sad :crying:
-but still so adorable...:+favlove:
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:iconnakkistiltz:
NakkiStiltz Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
Ahhhhhh this is adorable and sad~ the poor little jar alien baby thingies, they just wanted to be together. And they got to. <3

As for the art, WOW. I love the way you colored this. It looks all pretty and painty! 8D <3333 lovely work~
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elemenation Featured By Owner May 3, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
this is the most amazing comic I've ever read :S ... sorry 'I've ever seen''
no words, no plot line, nothing... a mere emotion :D
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:iconkumorigyaru:
Kumorigyaru Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009  Student Filmographer
awww :)
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:icondingokiss:
Dingokiss Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2009  Professional General Artist
this is the first piece of art work that made me cry. <3 amazing.
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:iconeridaiho:
EriDaiho Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008
woww... nice concept! *.*
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:iconanrati:
Anrati Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2008
This is so beautifull and also sad. However, I think it was a happy end, wasn't it?
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:iconmichalivan:
michalivan Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
yeah it was kind of happy end :)
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:iconadrovoncrow:
AdroVonCrow Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This work was feature in my last article [link] hope u don't mind!
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:iconmichalivan:
michalivan Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
thanks!
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:iconadrovoncrow:
AdroVonCrow Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
In order of a big feature I'm doing on my Journal, this work was suggested by one of my watchers, hope u don't mind! check my journal to see who suggested it!
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:iconmichalivan:
michalivan Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
thanks for featuring it in your journal.
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:iconhobbitpunk:
HobbitPunk Featured By Owner May 20, 2008  Professional Writer
nicely done...took me a few looks to understand where the crystal came from...that could have been a TAD more clear...but otherwise, VERY nice!
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:iconmixlagula:
mixlagula Featured By Owner May 20, 2008
wow, first you brought a great sci-fi feel to a simple theme, then you brought warmth to it as well.

loving the colors, they really pop out against the background of grays and blacks.
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:iconfeministhombre:
feministhombre Featured By Owner May 17, 2008
Amazing Amazing!
Incredibly...touching. harharhar :)
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:iconfireflyfight:
FireflyFight Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2008
So emotional, and the fact that you were able to display that through these tiny creatures is so wonderful. Absolutely a favorite.
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:iconmusuca:
musuca Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2008
Environment is cold while characters are on the borderline of being cute and ugly. But the story is touching :>. Congrats!
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:iconzero-optix:
Zero-Optix Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008  Professional General Artist
I agree with everyone here; very touching, it starts out kinda creepy then turns to the warm. :)
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:iconmathygard:
Mathygard Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2008
I don't know if I find this hopeful or exceedingly sad. In either case I'm sure it'll stay on my mind for quite some time to come.
A few questions does come to mind, however. Most importantly, did they know what would happen if they broke out of their tanks?
I'd kind of like to think they did.
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:iconcafe:
Cafe Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2007  Student Artist
something seriously shifted inside me
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:iconluxuryofpatience:
luxuryofpatience Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2007
This is INCREDIBLE.
The artwork told a story and it moved me.
That's rare.

Thank you for letting us view your artwork.
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