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It looks neat, you was specially attentive with little details, the barbed wire and the shape of the horns. I´m also fond of characters...


This was actually pretty great!!! i would love a continuation of wifetale-handplates. I have read tons of fanfics i im pretty sure nobo...

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It looks neat, you was specially attentive with little details, the barbed wire and the shape of the horns.

I´m also fond of characters with exclusive or peculiar weapons, like the one you did.
The scale helps to clarify his size, i really tought it was human-sized until i saw it.

His armor looks nice, but it seems uneffective for protection, leaving all the vital areas unguarded, i would have added some metal bracers so he at least could block enemy weapons with his arms, but maybe thats just me.

Im european and i always liked our armor style, thick and covering all vitals.

Its pretty good overall, you should be proud.
This was actually pretty great!!! i would love a continuation of wifetale-handplates.

I have read tons of fanfics i im pretty sure nobody have ever writed anything similar, this was completely original and fun, you perfectly mixed a new and original tale (gaster having a sudden wife who came from nowhere, adding depth to both characters) with an already successful and interesting AU, like hanplates.

In a fandom when it seems everything have been already tried, fresh air like this is always welcome, this is the second comic i read from you, but i will keep doing it, this is so great!!!

The background is pretty non-existent, but if that allows you to draw faster, its well worth it.

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Aneel555 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the watch :D
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Mateteag Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2018
Gracias por la llama, amigo.
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Pa-Bu Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Muchas gracias and all the best to you :D!
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JaneRunsFast Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the Llama!
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vodkaskull Featured By Owner Edited Jul 10, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
estaba leyendo tu fic de bittybones ;v; escribes bien pero mi corazon de pollo no soporta tanta maldad a las cosas bonitas. lo siento Oshawott cry plz 
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Hello, Spain!:flagofspain: 
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Thanks so much for the watch! It means a lot :icondragonhug: 
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Thanks for the watch, I very appreciate it Undertale SOUL - Red
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Judiho Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Heya! How is your subscription to AO3?
I hope the wait don't have kill your determination about writting.

Keep your dreams and stay determined!
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