The work is pretty solid in all fairness. The more I looked at it though I spotted some critiques. The brightness of the character made it harder to spot the electric charge on the hand. I don't know if more would help because I respect the minimal amount.
The basically straight cut hair doesn't sit well with me especially noticeable on the fringe on her head. Also, the wind isn't picking up the hair on the top her head, just above the forehead. This may have been done to show that the hair is wet, which is done right on the non-windswept side of the head, but just overdone on the windswept side.
Will have to credit the work of rain hitting the body shown quite well.