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i wanted to make something with some text effect :faint: maybe i did too much, i hide a bit the emoticon animation maybe :p
anyway hope you like it :aww:
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LineBirgitte's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

There are lots of emote-punches out there, but this is really something! The animation is wonderfully smooth and the "new" shading of yours is really adorable!

I realise that the point of this was to make something with text, but I really would have wanted it without the text. It's so obvious when the blue one starts blabbering away, so the "bla bla bla" isn't needed at all. I do really like the way you animated "uppercut" but I don't think that's needed either. The punch <is> an uppercut and so the text is only stating the obvious.

I would really love to see this without the text, but of course I really like at as it is now as well.

You have total control of the bounce and the shadow and the emotion - which we all can relate to of course - flows from there! <img src="…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart" />
AutobotHoneflash's avatar
The punch might be mistaken as a Shoryuken
clpConnorLynn's avatar
Very good critique.
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MenInASuitcase's avatar
yes it is right that the text wasn't needed but i also think it give abit more violence to the punch effect, and i think the text could be keep but the size of the file could maybe bigger to let more space and not hide the emoticon! :aww: anyway thank you for the critic
LineBirgitte's avatar
It's just one opinion ;)

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shadow: blah blah blah blah blah blah ticci toby blah blah blah blah blah waffles blah blah
irene: :ShutTheFuckUppercut: by MenInASuitcaseshut up im trying to beat skulls at cob
SaphiraLuxray405's avatar
This made me laugh too much! :dignity-laugh: 
Derp-Puppy's avatar
this is me when i talk to my friends and they just slap me to make me stop QwQ
MyssCupcake's avatar
It's funny how he keeps doing that yet the blue one still doesn't And i'm kinda like the blue one with my mom.>.<
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I remember when my brother had a deviantart account and once he saw this... well you can probably see where this is going...
Gamma343's avatar
rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl that's hilarious and quite clever. good job!!
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:shutthefuckuppercut: x3
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:iconshutthefuckuppercutplz: once again i failed
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