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I'm sorry... by Melomiku I'm sorry... by Melomiku
Baba's POV

After all the guests left, I was told to help the queen or should I say, my sister Bellbo,  up the stairs because her body was still in shock after the... odd incident. What made her this way was that a prince was going to marry her, but unfortunately,  married someone that I loved too. Bistre, the lady I loved, did not look quite happy. I guess she's in shock too. 
I took Bellbo to her room and carefully put her on the bed. I walked out to wait for her to change. Until she said my name, I was free to go and rest. But that second part wasn't what happened, however. I heard Bellbo crying. No, not crying, sobbing. I found it was odd for someone to just get married so quickly even though they met for only a couple of hours. Although, it is the queen's choice. I knocked on the door.

"Bellbo, are you alright? May I come in?"
I came in and saw her sitting up. Her face was covered in tears and her eyes were red. I sat down on the bed
"I feel sorry that this happened to you."
"That prince is and imbecile! I knew there's no such thing as love at first sight. Even though I'm a princess, I can never have a happy ending. "
"You have me Bellbo. Remember all those years of waiting? You don't have to anymore." I said. I didn't want her to keep thinking of the prince. She smiled. 
"You're right. Thank you. I've actually found a way to get my mind off the idea he's engaged" She smiled even wider and gave me a hug. 
"Good night!"
"Good night." I replied, and closed the door.

Next morning, the queen was in a conference room. She is was looking at a map showing all the countries. She put a dagger through the map, stabbing through the brown nation. I was beside her, staring at the stabbed map. Bellbo told me to get the minister. I knew this wasn't going to be good. After getting him to the room, Bellbo, with the softest voice she could make even though the doors are closed, said one line that made me shiver.

"Make sure you destroy the brown country."

The guards were set in place, holding their horses and sharpening their swords. I was looking outside at all of them, getting ready for a war. I heard footsteps behind me. Bellbo was holding a small sheath and handed it to me. Inside was a dagger. 

"I want you to go too."
"M-me...? Why?"
"You felt bad that I didn't get married to the prince, so you must feel the same way! You know who the girl is right?"
I had to lie. It's the only thing to do to keep her happy right now."No..."
She sighed. "Well, you did see her at the party so I guess you should've! She has brown hair, right? I want all the people who has brown hair to die to make sure she's dead so that I may get my prince back!"
I stared at her then took a deep breath. "As you wish your highness." 

I took Josephine, her horse with me. Until we got there, we began the total chaos. Well, the guards did anyways, I went to seek out Bistre. I looked around and inside the bakery, the place where we met, and other places. I passed by a house, with a girl with black hair.


I punched the door, yelling for her to come. She quickly opened the door.

"Where's Bistre?!"
"She left the bakery a few minutes before you came. She's headed for the forest."
"Thank you!"I was about to leave, until I looked at her once more.
"Why aren't you running?" I asked confusingly.
"The queen wants people from the brown country to die because of Bistre correct? She has a completely vague idea of how she looks like. She wanted to destroy the brown country because all she knows is that Bistre has brown hair. Everyone but me has brown hair."

I was shocked of how smart this girl was. I said my good bye and headed to the forest. It seemed like forever to find her. After going through the forest with trees that probably look the same, I found Bistre by a well. My hands were shaking and my heart was pounding. I finally got the courage to say something.

She turned around smiling. "Baba, is that you? Did you go against the queen's orders to save me?"
I wish I could, but I couldn't stand to make her sad and disobey her. "N-no I-I..." I took out the dagger from the sheath. I walked up to her. 
I walked up closer.
I steadily lifted the dagger.
"...I thought you loved me."
I stopped. I couldn't take it anymore. I stood there, crying. I wished I could just take her away from here and live happily ever after. I wish I could give her to my sister and tell her that Bistre is innocent. I just wish I didn't have to go through this...I just wish...
"Baba..." She gave me a hug. I embraced her warmth. I needed this after all these mess of events. She looked at me with kind eyes and sighed. "End my life... I don't want to be in this marriage. I don't want you to be sad that your sister would be sad. I don't want to suffer through this anymore."

I let go. I gathered all my courage to do something I would never do or will never get to do anymore. Because...

"...Goodbye Bistre." I pulled her in for a kiss. A kiss I didn't want to end. I saw as her eyes closed to enjoy her last seconds of life. I started to cry once again. I lifted up my dagger.

...Bistre is gone.


And now excuse me while I go cry in a corner.

Bistre belongs to :iconitbluebeadti:
Baba belongs to :iconkazunapikachu:

Enjoy!  (Or not since this is so sad...)
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KazunaPikachu Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I remember this :stare:

I remember seeing this, and my heart was aching so badly I had to step away from the computer and--
wow the feelings


It's an amazing drawing, and an amazing story, and--
let me just lie down for a bit in a puddle of tears

Melomiku Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015  Student General Artist
I was actually thinking about that reason why you didn't answer in such a long time .3.

I feel ya, it gave a lot of people feels. Poor guys needed hugs. :huggle:
Kamuy787 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
my gawd.... :stare:
i... im sad now ;-;
Melomiku Featured By Owner Edited Jan 31, 2015  Student General Artist
Dude, I think I'm going to need ma hug machine cause all of ya are affected by this! Here ya go! :iconsupertighthugplz:
Kamuy787 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you T-T
Hinako29 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015
I think I'm started crying......
Melomiku Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Student General Artist
Nuu I had no idea this was so sad (okay I did and found it hard to write the story because I felt like I was doing something horrible to others) that it could make someone cry! Here's a hug :huggle:
Hinako29 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015
5 seconds hug  Thanks , hug back hope you feel better soon 
TheChaoticChild Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So much :iconfeelsplz: ;A;

This Is Better Than The Original "Servant of evil" in my opinion anyways, ;u;
Melomiku Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Student General Artist
I know, I was having a hard time drawing because she's dead ;v;

(Also, I agree with you about this being better than the actual one, I'm always listening to the music imagining it was Bellbo and Baba)

Anyways, I'm happy you like it! :iconsupertighthugplz: 
norikomaster Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wait is this servent of evil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Melomiku Featured By Owner Edited Jan 30, 2015  Student General Artist
Yes it is! With Bellbo, Baba, Bistre, Bleach, Blaze, and Bellany (my OC Bellany is in this because I couldn't find anyone for the job and that I decided to make this AU) in it! I'm happy you noticed uguuu >//////< In my gallery I have a folder for the Servant of Evil AU if you wanna see it.
norikomaster Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank...... ||run and search folder||
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