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"You sure are a riot (F/N)-chan." Izaya said as he returned from buying us drinks after the movie was over.
"You're not so bad yourself Orihara." I took both drinks he held and handed him one.
"This one's yours."
"And how do you know that Orihara? We ordered the same thing."
"So it seems you've caught on. How could you tell that one of the drinks was drugged?"
I sipped my drink before answering, "I didn't. I just don't trust you and assumed you had done something."
Izaya Orihara threw his head back and laughed. "You guessed correctly. Smart and pretty; I like that."
I held back a snort. If he knew about my little "problem" he would run like the rest of them and isolate me.
You see I have a mental illness like many doctors have called it before though I don't think of it as that. I have multiple personality disorder. Though mine seems a bit different than the typical case of Dissociative Identity Disorder or DID for short. Instead of "blacking out" or forgetting what happens when one of my personalities takes over I'm aware half of the time of what they're doing. I have three other personalities, all of them extremely different from one another.
It started the summer when I began middle school. The first one to appear was Mary. Mary is a shy little six-year-old girl. She was born when I passed by a play ground. I watched as my body moved without my consent. I was laughing and playing with the little kids. When they asked me my name I told them it was Mary and I was six years old. When I regained control, I heard a voice in my head; it was a little girl's. She told me she was Mary and that she was happy to meet me and wanted to be my friend. For the most part I don't have trouble with her. She only comes out when I do something childish or am near children.
The second one was Marceline. Marceline is a seventeen-year-old punk rocker. She's crude, and tough, but has a soft spot for kids. She was born when I went to a rock concert with my classmates at the time. I heard the band play a song called "Taking over Me" By Evanescence. It was the first time I heard it though I knew all the words and sang them confidently. When I switched back, Marceline introduced herself to Mary and I. Marceline only comes out whenever I'm threatened, or she feels like she needs to step in. She too was now a voice in my head.
The third one, Matice is by far the worst. She's an evil, cruel, manipulative twenty-year-old woman who enjoys sleeping around. She showed up at a Halloween Party we had in middle school where I went with my first two real friends; Shinra Kishitani and Shizuo Heiwajima. It's a really bad memory for me so I'd rather not talk about it. Anyway after Matice embarrassed me in front of my classmates and new friends, I was never invited to another party after that. (At least a girl's party.) Matice is uncontrollable. She would take over whenever she felt like it and used my body without my permission. When she first showed up I was labeled not only as a freak but even worse; a slut. Fortunately, Mary and Marceline managed to imprison her somehow and we haven't seen her since. I know I have to be careful though, if I get too angry or show too much love or lust towards someone I'm sure she'll come back.
Oh I almost forgot to mention one thing, when one of my other personalities in control I get sent to another place varying on the one who's in control. If Marceline was in control, I would be in a dirty room filled with bottles that smelled of smoke. If it was Mary, I would be in a play ground. As for Matice; I was in a loud bar. I was never alone wherever I ended up. The personalities who weren't in control would keep me company.
"(F/N)-chan, are you listening?"
I snapped back into reality and remembered I was in the mysterious Izaya Orihara's presence.
"I'm sorry, I spaced out. What did you say Orihara?" I said as I smiled apologetically.
"I asked if you would like to come to my place for a while." The man's eyes gazed into my own. He really was handsome, but my heart belonged to someone else.
Not wanting to waste an opportunity to learn more about him I jumped at the chance. Not literally of course.
"That sounds great. I can't stay long though."
Izaya smiled, "Any amount of time will do. Shall we go?"
Holy **** on a **** sandwich! Chapter one has 30 favorites and over 200 views in two days!
You guys are....wow...I really didn't think anyone would like this to be honest so....wow...
Now be honest tell me in the coment section if you read it for the picture because I think that's why people wanted to see what it was!
So TELL ME!
I seriously want to know because if a lot of you answer yes than I'll have to put pictures on my other two xD
Anyway, since so many people liked the first chapter I decided to update quicker than usual. (Told you commenting, faving, and attention to my stories makes me work harder!)
Back to the story itself, in my dream I kept changing my attitude so to spice it up a little I decided to make Reader-chan or Maigo as I named her have DID a.k.a. multiple personality disorder.
I've got to say. she's really different from any character I've had. She has different personalities for frick's sake! xD
That alone makes her a HELL of a lot easier to write for too xD
Anyway thanks for giving this a chance and kepp loving this like you love the first >:D
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WhiteHeartAlice Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015
Amazing, Awesome, Cool what other word can I describe it?
Keep up the good work~^^
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Meleena-Chan Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2015  Student Writer
Thanks!
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Mini-Monny Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think it's called Gemini Syndrome (well that's only if you only have 1 other personality)
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HetaliaFan0019 Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Student
Marceline!! By any chance, is that marceline the vampire queen?? XD
Just kidding, this is sooo awesome!! Your dream is freaking cool!
Wish mine was too, hahah!! :D
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Meleena-Chan Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Student Writer
Hahaha actually yes I did name Marceline after my beloved Marcy the Vampire Queen. Thanks! I know I could make millions publishing books about my dreams
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shirakuokami Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012
I actually read this one because I read your shizuoxreader story, I was Laughing like a fool the entire time I read it *isshot* and I did also read it because of the picture. I mean Shizu-chan's face x///D
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Meleena-Chan Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Student Writer
Hahaha thank so much xD
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samikira Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist
MOAR please4 it'is awesome
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Meleena-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Student Writer
I just posted 3
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manda43 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
i love it!!! :heart:
thank you sooo much for putting another chapter up
....but....
I NEED MORE!!!!
please continue with this as soon as you can
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Meleena-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Student Writer
trust me I will I'm currently on vacation but I will ask my brither if I can use his laptop to submit a chapter ^^
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manda43 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012
lol thank you :heart:
i cant wait for it :la:
but all i know is that i WILL read it when it gets posted :)
i love it :squee:
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Meleena-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks so much! :iconbowplz:
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manda43 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012
anytime :la:
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cuttie687 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
its getting good.... X3 you gotta keep going XD
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Meleena-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks! I plan to!
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VictoriaWatson Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
o.o interesting can't wait for more!
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Meleena-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks!
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VictoriaWatson Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem :)
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Meleena-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Student Writer
Did you read it because of the picture?
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VictoriaWatson Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Huh? No why O.o?
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Meleena-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Student Writer
Sorry just curious to see how it this got so popular so fast Sorry ^^;
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VictoriaWatson Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol it's ok xD just a random question. I just saw an update on my DA thing and decided to read another story of yours I do go though my updates regularly XD most of the time...
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Meleena-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Student Writer
Oh ok ^^
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BlackDragonMagicks Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012
Love it~! :iconiloveitplz: but i don't like Matice....she sounds like trouble... :iconwutwutplz:
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Meleena-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Student Writer
Oh trust me she is -_-"
And thank you~
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