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I'm sorry, all my apps are long. This is why I like script style. So it can be short. lol

★ Name:
Task Name: Crucible
Real Name: Sato

★ Age: 26
Astrology: Sagittarius sun, Capricorn asc, Scorpio moon

★ Height: 6' 4" (193.0 cm)

★ Partner: Elpis
Elpis application by MAGE-RIGHTS

★ Physical Attributes:
Hair: long silver hair down back
Skin: bronzed peach
Eye: spring green
Build: athletic
Other: various piercings on both ears; rings on almost all fingers; left nipple piercing; tattoos on left forearm, left hip and side, and back; left-handed; uncircumcised (?)

★ Personality:
Crucible comes off as cold, aloof, and extremely proud. He rejects most people and interactions as beneath him, and dislikes people trying to get too familiar with him. He's usually silent, as he doesn't like speaking in English (or the language of colonizers). There's an air of arrogance or elitism about him. He's dismissive and rude when he's not pleased, and he is easily angered at slights against him. If insulted at a distance, he will quietly seethe and secretly vow some kind of vengeance; if he's insulted to his face, he will feel compelled to exact vengeance then and there. This is when people will usually see his many prejudices and the judgmental attitude he has (a lot of them bordering on racism as an outward expression of his natural state of anger). Unsurprisingly, most people find him to be quite a nasty person. Not that he cares, as he's extremely independent and single-minded with his quest for exacting revenge. He will follow orders and rules to the extent that he believes it will help him achieve a goal he has in mind, but there is a wild and ruthless nature behind his facade of pristine control that seems hard to tame. On the other side, he has great interest in learning about different cultural customs (despite expressing distaste), having a good ear for music, and a body easily trained for dance. He is sensitive when it comes to nature and the environment, and seems to show a great reverence to the cycles of life and death in the grand scale of things. If one can get past his merciless guard, they may be able to have a glimpse at his passionate, noble, and loyal core.

+ works well under pressure, focused
+ passionate
+ extremely loyal to people he trusts, extends that trust to the loved ones of that person
+ self-reliant and independent
+ musically inclined and easily learns when it comes to singing, dancing, playing instruments
+ acutely observant/aware of surroundings (not much escapes his notice--probably how he catches all those slights against him >___> )
+ good at imitating voices and sounds
+ love of nature and respect for its cycles

★ Hobbies:
exacting revenge, learning about different cultural customs, playing or enjoying music, enjoying nature and natural surroundings, performing for people he trusts, speaking in his own language, enjoys eating different breads

any food he's not in the mood for, Colterons, colonizers (elites and the like), people trying to be familiar with him or overly friendly with him, being made fun of or slighted/snubbed in any way, having to speak in any language other than his own

★ Skills:
- Acutely fine-tuned senses: very good sense of hearing (picking out small sounds, voices, ear for music) & sight (high resolution sight, perceives very quickly if something is off/has a certain count), touch and smell are good but not as developed; generally very aware of surroundings
- Fine Balance & Coordination: physically fit and very graceful and exact with movements
- Fast and Agile: fast on his feet and with actions, fast reaction times
- Skilled Hunter & Tracker: given the skills above, he's also excellent at hunting and tracking prey (including stray ships and Colteron)
- Strong will and very focused: determined to see through anything he puts his mind to (mostly vengeance lol)

★ History:
Sato is considered aboriginal in origin, but a few wars and resource shortages led to Sato's people being forced to abandon their land. They were scattered among different terraformed colonies with false promises of being able to continue their cultural heritage. As a latecomer to some of the more advanced terraformed colonies, Sato's people did not exactly receive equal treatment as citizens, especially as they tried maintaining their lifestyle and cultural practices in the face of a new frontier.

A Colteron attack lead to another disaster for his people, one that they would not recover from. Calls for help and reinforcements were not answered until long after the attack. Sato, now 9, was found among the rubble as one of the few survivors. For the next few years, the few people left in his tribe tried to band together and keep customs alive, but the futility and trauma was too much to sustain it. They eventually were led away to assimilate into the main colony city or were transferred into the better-established Unicorn colony. Sato felt like everyone was betraying their origins, so he stayed where he was, in his damaged neo-homeland in isolation. Rumours and jokes began spreading about "the prince of the forest" living like a maniac hermit. The curious and sympathetic tried to convince Sato to come back with them, but he turned them all away (sometimes violently).

This rumour led a young researcher named Heimdl to this colony forest, and what he found was a very hostile young man trying to defend "his territory". Heimdl stuck around for a long time, coming back again and again to extract as much information and time from Sato as he could while teaching Sato about the world outside the forest. Before they knew it, years had passed and they had established a bond of friendship with one another. Word of an amassing Colteron invasion was spreading though, and this flared old feelings of anger and vindictiveness in Sato. Heimdl took this chance to suggest to Sato that he could get revenge if he joined the military, but that he first had to leave the forest. Heimdl himself was thinking of enlisting so he could travel and explore the universe. The idea intrigued Sato and the thought of vengeance was even sweeter, but most compelling motivation was that he may not be able see Heimdl again if he didn't follow.

Sato enlisted, believing he'd be sorted as a fighter (as navigators were positions for elites; plus he wanted to be the one personally pulling the trigger on Colteron). He passed most physical tests with flying colours, but more impressive were his perceptual abilities and mental acuity when it came to determining scouting and tracking patterns in the enemy. Not willing to pass this chance up, the commanding officers decided this earned him a spot to be trained as a navigator along with Heimdl (he's actually pretty proud that he was consistently scoring better than Heimdl!). His main problem, however, seemed to be his self-imposed language barrier and interpersonal skills. His psychological profile also seemed problematic, but his test scores overall were too exceptional to pass up. He was given the task name of "Crucible" for his amazing performance under pressure and for all the emotional volatility he held inside. He has gone through a few dangerous missions with a few fighters, but his previous fighters met either grisly ends or were heavily injured. Crucible came away either unscathed or suffering minor injuries. It seems that although he was competent enough in navigating himself in and out of the fray, he held little concern for what would happen to the fighters partnered with him, leading him to push ship and passengers to extreme limits. Commanding officers have made note of this and are trying to find a compatible fighter he won't be so eager to discard.

★ Bad habits or Specific Traits:

- seems very moody or angry on the inside
- probably suffers from some form of ptsd, but it's mostly repressed or controlled with anger
- bent on vengeance or getting even with everyone
- shows little concern for others' feelings or lives if they get in his way
- elitist / arrogant / dismissive
- prejudiced and judgmental (he will come off as racist to people)
- prudish
- stubborn / wilful
- he will smack things out of people's hands or hit/kick them if they offend him by trying to "act nice" to him
- generally just hard to get along with

* Maybe he is just really tsundere, okay? xD
* Heimdl is his closest friend, but he doesn't treat him very well or doesn't even acknowledge their friendship half the time
* can't hold alcohol well, very easily drunk
* curses or mutters things in mother tongue and avoids communicating in English/the main language.

★ Theme Songs:
- "My Body is a Cage" - The Arcade Fire:

★ Extra: I must mention again that he is kind of very prudish and doesn't exactly like being touched, and overall is likely asexual (though not a virgin!), but he still can experience emotions such as affection and love. He is just overall hard to deal with because he has a lot of emotional baggage. Crucible often talks in his native tongue to avoid communicating in English because he's a jerk, so I will be using [[speech]] brackets to indicate when he's doing that. The language is relatively obscure and almost dead thanks to centuries of colonization and upheaval of his people, but there are still records of it somewhere, so it's possible to at least learn the basics.


★ Preferred RP Style:
It is fast for me and I can easily tell who's talking and who's doing what without wasting my time interpreting redundant descriptions. Kind of like a comic book from panel to panel!
I will often employ a form of "advanced script" when a scene calls for it to add more detail or drama, but I generally like to be to the point. I will also litter it with ascii emoticons because my dudes are so anime. lol

★ Method Of RP: COMMENTS (or forum)! -- All my notes tend to get lost and chatting is too fast-paced because I like to take time to write (it takes me up to an hour to choreograph a scene lol.), and I don't want people waiting on me like that.

★ Other RP Style: If you absolutely cannot handle script style, I CAN write in paragraph style, but it will take a long time (forever) to craft. xD

★ Do you mind starting the RP? :
Generally I will not start an RP because I am lazy and very casual with RPing. I might if I'm in the mood? Or am compelled to by a character?

★ What are you not comfortable with?:
I am generally okay with everything, but if you're a minor, don't try to have sexy-times RPs with me unless you want it very sanitized. lol I am also not very comfortable with explicit sexual detail (e.g. "his veiny shaft quivered as droplets of warmth peaked out from under his tight grip" lololol I could make it even more explicit, but I won't, so don't expect anything on this level)

★ Language: English only.

★ Extra:
I am a VERY CASUAL RPer. This means I don't really schedule times or "agree" to RP scenarios. I just do it when I feel like it or respond when someone else starts. I will also let RPs die if I get too bored. lol (I like making art more than RPing)
Sometimes I will write really fast and leave typos/grammatical mistakes by accident (I cry a little when I see it, and I will fix it if I see it). I will often not use capitalization when describing actions in script style because that is often in point form. I don't often curse/swear, but some characters (Forge) do.. a lot. Please ask if you need that censored lol. I generally RP with a "cast", so if you RP with one of them, chances are you will run into MANY of them (this is why script style is preferred by me).
My characters usually have their own personality and goals and I am sensitive to interactive chemistry, so don't feel bad if their chemistry doesn't work out with your characters. Some of them are more flexible than others if you really want to "try" something, but no guarantees!

Crucible: *stands in line impatiently in mess hall, narrowing eyes at man in front of him* [[Hurry up and get out of my way, colonizer scum.]] = =
navigator: ..? Pardon? *turns* Oh, it's you. *looks him up and down* Crucible. *sneers* Around here, chief, we try talking in ENGLISH. How someone like you even got here, I'll never know. *turns back around*
Crucible: *eyes sharpen, quickly juts palm of hand into the back of navigator's head*
navigator: AJGH! *jolted into next person and falls to ground, looks up, fuming* Do you WANT to get thrown into the brig or dumped back to whatever garbage pile you came from?! *other navigators helping him up*
Crucible: *rolls eyes and walks away dismissively*
navigator: HEY! Don't think you can just walk away from this! You're going to get stripped of your navigator rank soon the way you're acting and killing off your fighters! They'll ship you back to your shitty Pegesus colony and you'll be a dirt-shovelling miner like the rest of the tree squatters!
Crucible: *ignores him and scans room, seeing other navigators eyeing him suspiciously, disheartened not seeing Heimdl to sit with*
Anvil: Eh! [[Hello!]] *waves over to Crucible with a smile*
Crucible: ? *turns head to look at Anvil, surprised* (Did he just.. speak my..) ..
Anvil: Pegesus colony, right? Representing!
Crucible: *tense but curious, crosses over onto fighter's side of the mess hall* [[I did not think to find brethren among the dregs of society here..]]
Anvil: Euh.. xD Pardon my lack, but I'm not.. very fluent. My mother didn't get to teach me much.. Ah.. [[Sit down.]] *pats seat*
Crucible: *looks down at seat suspiciously, then at Anvil, bends down to eye level to stare at his face* = =
Anvil: o__o? *blinks*
Crucible: *sneers and stands back up* [[You are nothing but a half-blooded imposter.]]
Anvil: Heyyy.. I don't like.. the tone of your voice there. >___> *scratches head, only able to make out a few words* [[Half-blooded? Imposter?]] What's that?
Crucible: - - *looks down at him disdainfully* [[It means you're low-bred trash with the blood of colonizers running through your veins and a waste of my time.]]  *tuns to walk away*
Anvil: Hey wait! [[Have some food!]] We're having borscht today~! *presents plate*
Crucible: *turns head to look at it, displeased* [[Disgusting.]] *slaps plate out of Anvil's hands and continues walking back to his side to sit until lunch is over*
Anvil: -- *caught off guard looks at mess and then back at Crucible just sitting there silently judging others* .. And here I thought I was making a new friend..

The best way to get me to RP? Draw pictures of my OCs interacting with your OCs and I'll feel obligated to write a comment, fave, and have my character react. LOL
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MAGE-RIGHTS Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2015  Hobbyist
our fighter and navi got paired up omg

caught a pretty one
we should totally do stuff, or w/e whenever u got the time yeee >8)
Meibatsu Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oooh yes nicee!! I have added him into Crucible's profile!

omg i usually have no time to do stuff these days.. ;____;
we'll see if i ever can get a picture or two in for the latest prompt lol
MadKim Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Wow you hit all the good points in what I love in characters both physically and personalitywise! ;A; :heart: makes me want to make my boy a fighter just for him ♥♥♥ , though that was the original plan, I'm still unsure XD (and IDK if you already had someone else in mind or if you'd like my swetheart)

Anyway, h's pretty cool ;n; :heart:
Meibatsu Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You mean you like long white haired boys with really horrible personalities? XDDD  (Though I'm guessing because he's angsty and frustratingly complex--which is why I really like him--besides the looks too~ *__* )
Its so great that you like him~!

I'm actually waiting for the group admin to assign random pairings for fighter-navigator set ups, but even if they don't get paired as a team that your fighter can still interact with him or even try to wiggle past his defences~ heheheh~! XD So don't feel like you need to make a character to cater to mine, but I am perfectly open to having them interact and see where it goes. ;D
Also as a warning, I am pretty bad at responding to RPs in a timely manner if we do RP. lol
MadKim Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Unf, yes.

Gou Matsuoka (Sees Hawt Body -Shy-) [V1]


Oh I'm aware of that! I'm just making my fighter, but it'd be nice if we got paired! *fangirls* (though I have no idea when pairings are decided, I'm hoping to finish my application today xD) and no worries, I already had a general idea of my character from the beginning, I just got indecisive about if he would fit better as fighter or navigator (I got that cleared up now though XD) besides it'd be more interesting to see them meet and interact as two different/independent human beings (?) xD

And no worries, my schedule is a bit weird (since I have a job and do little commissions on the side) so things are going to be a bit irregular with me, but yeah, I try my best :'D
Meibatsu Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oooh well, I hope to see your fighter soon then~~!
It seems I got paired with someone who hasn't even put a profile up for their character yet? >___>; I am not sure how this is going to work. lolol
And now a couple of my fighters are paired with no one because not enough people made navigators hahaha~
They'd probably have to interact on the ship anyway.

Yeah, I have a job too. ;_; I wish I could just laze around and art more lol
MadKim Featured By Owner Edited Aug 1, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
ROFL heeeey maybe it's me? HAHAHAHAHA IDK *still working on profile*

I might work on a Navigator too, but maybe after I get a better hang of the deal... I've never really RPed anything Sci-fi related IN MY LIFE. So... this will be somewhat a challenge I guess. I hope I get some help from around, though I'll give my best anyway ;n; since I really, really like the webcomic Nagisa 

I wish I could make a living out of drawing at home so I could stay in and never go out... (at least not on winter it's cold as fuck akjsdhagsd *hugs blanket and hot water bag*)

EDIT: wait no, I just saw the pairing post thing, omg I need to hurry, I feel ashamed I haven't got my profile yet!  *hides*
Meibatsu Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your fighter got paired with Samson instead. xD

I think if you made a navigator, it's definitely end up with one of my fighters at this rate! I can't believe the randomizer left both my fighters out. LOL

I haven't really RP'd anything sci-fi either! I just make stuff up a lot of the time. :>

You can dooo thisss~~
MadKim Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Yes, yes.... I CAN DO IT! *fists up*

Though it's weird because their application has been removed (?) idk what's going on *cries* I was trying to link back to their account just now and I can't find ;_; (My application is done btw! *_* if you find anything weird... please let me know. I tend to get lost in my thoughts and lose coherence sometimes XD)

I might start working on that navigator, since I'm curious how that'd work (it won't be too soon though, I feel like I just gave birth to my OC or something XD)
Meibatsu Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wait oh.. maybe they left the group! The profile definitely existed before...!
I think the only person I got paired with also left because they are not watching the group or in members either. >__>;

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Filanwizard Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hes a good looking fellow...  I will admit my elf would hit on him.
Meibatsu Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oho~ That would be great! xD
Too bad he's either be confused or offended by everything. lollll
Filanwizard Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha yea too bad.  So where exactly is he from?  distant future Earth or just a humanoid alien?
Meibatsu Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Technically in canon, humanoid alien from a planet named Gaia (he's actually more of a forest spirit actually!).
In this image, I inserted him into a fan universe, so here he's more just distant future human. XD
Filanwizard Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ahh quite interesting then,  I have done that too with OCs had different versions.  Well his friend Forge is cute too XD.

If only I had the time for RP groups.

On a side note if you ever want to have any or a few of these space boys meet someone I would be willing to use an OC or make one up on the fly XD.

so since forest spirit I imagine his canon form is not terribly high tech unless hes a really advanced forest spirit. =)
Meibatsu Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah! Having AUs of OCs is pretty fun!
Hahah.. Forge is also a jerk! Although possibly not as harsh of one as Crucible!

I know, I usually don't have much time to actually RP since I'd rather just draw pictures or something, but I joined this one to have an excuse to draw my characters in space uniforms. XD

Yeah, he's really.. I guess typical druid-type of a character. XD In the original world he's in, there is so much mana in the atmosphere that it disrupts technology that doesn't have a protective life force/biological system to regulate mana absorption. (There's a very techy planet in the same solar system, but that planet's people can't easily bring their tech over because it gets fried).
He uses weapons such as bows, scythes, and skinning knives and has a fair amount of illusion, light, and forest magic.
Filanwizard Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh I have time for RPs I just reply slowly.   Hmm I kinda wonder how their scifi versions would react to a 21st century human wandering onto their ship if they landed in a field on Earth XD.

My character Filan has a few versions of himself from the ever known space elf to a more steampunk setting.  where his airship goes between worlds via magitek powered portal generators.   In his space form he follows most of the soft scifi tropes.  His steampunkish form gets well weird...  airship boilers are fired by thermal crystals that just naturally heat up.  and lift is generated by other metals that generate lift when heated by the steam.  yea Magitek steampunk...
Meibatsu Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahhaa.. probably not as slow as me! @_@ I've taken weeks to reply to things sometimes. lol

21st century human as in us?! XD Hahaha~ Probably they would be a little smug about how much superior tech they have, and also be a little condescending because we haven't lived through the hardships they have. lol
Crucible would be pretty quick to toss anyone out of his ship and be pretty territorial about it without saying much. Forge would probably be more of a talker with "Who the Hell are you?!" kind of questions.

Ooh that is cool! I like the mix of sci-fi + fantasy! It's easier for me to digest magic theory stuff. XD
I made an AU where airships and ships in general were more of a "thing" on the planet and considered making a comic if that at some point.. but it's been about 8 years by now.. >____>
I am really good at putting off projects and procrastinating in general! lol
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SeasideDreamer Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014   Digital Artist
Meibatsu Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha well you said Kostya was a bit spoiled in life, right? That's probably why he's such a baby. XD Crucible grew up kind of grew up on the opposite end, not sickness but war-torn instead.. SO HA HAD TO BECOME A MAN!!!
SeasideDreamer Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014   Digital Artist
he was spoiled in that he always had money, but he didn't have anyone to look up to, so he kind of grew up on his own as a kid, and had to deal with losing his eye by himself as a kid, so he's grown up very angry and unloved ; A ; so he's kind of spiteful now, and is very suspicious when it seems like anyone wants to get close to him, because he thinks they must have some secret motive or something ; o ; 
Meibatsu Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
He found a willing partner to take care of him though~
But I'm sure Crucible would agree with him on the last bit though. Everyone's out to get something. xD
BeefxCake Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lookit this yaoi piece of shit i love him.

im glad you put so much thought into all of them it's great XD they're so 3 dimensional.
Meibatsu Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I know he's such a pretty mean thing I'm sure plenty of people just want to school him some and fix his bad attitude. xD

Thank you! It's mostly because they are already developed and established outside of Starfighter in their original universe. xD I just adapt all their stories to fit in hehe. But that's also half the fun, trying to make them fleshed out and work in the fanuniverse too!
BeefxCake Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol it's ok if he's a punk XD im sure we'll all love him someway XD

pff thats cool

I know when i make characters i have to make sure there's a reason for frickin everything they do. every mannerism, or gesture just how they carry themselves and stuff. gotta be a reason. XD

I didn't put up most of apollo's backstory on here because i'd rather rp with a person and have them sort of get peeks and glimpses at it as they went along in their verse. :3 im wierd like that.
Meibatsu Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahha be drawn in by aesthetics, repulsed by personality, then uhm.. maybe fondness will grow lol.

I don't think I come up with some of it until I have to (like when I start drawing them), but yeah, it eventually just becomes a part of them as they develop and their personalities drive the results. Which is kinda nice! It's like watching babies grow lol Sometimes I have no idea why they do what they do. >_> I like guessing, but it's like there's a part of them they still want to keep secret until they reveal it later, which sometimes surprised even me? Maybe that sounds a little crazy, but most of my characters are like that and it's like a fun discovery. xD

I think I put a lot of their story up just in case I didn't get to rp much so people still knew about them. But yeah! I wanna discover what drove Apollo to apathy, what his great mistake was!
BeefxCake Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol i prolly just spoiled it with the last comment but he goes about it differently xD but i like seeing how hed get along with the fleet and all xD we gotta do dis 
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