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March 23, 2011.

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Black Coma's Wiki page (updated with more info):
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BASIC STATS
Alias: Black Coma
Group / Alliance Affiliation(s): Member of the Adhir Matriarchy

Secret ID: Coman Nader
Nickname(s): Colms (only Jericho really calls him this though), Coma, Black
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Nationality: Mesopotamian-American (cambion)
Places Lived: Arabian Peninsula, US
Current Residence: Currently living in Bludhaven, close to many of his brood members.
Height: 6' 1"
Weight: 172 lbs
Eye Color: deep green
Hair Color: black
Hair Type: straight and glossy, usually keeps it cut enough to not block his vision.
Skin Colour: Pale peach.
Physical Description: Check out close up of clothing here fav.me/d4tqo3d

Coman is a physically fit male with a toned but not buff build. He sports a distinct aquiline (Roman) nose and has pretty classic fashion sense. Whether on the prowl or out and about with his cousins blending in with humans, Coman usually dresses in high quality clothes with the intention to exude an image of control and success.

He enjoys wearing dress pants, belts, fine knits, blazers, and dressy shoes. He also appreciates accessories such as fine watches, shades, and jewellery, but often does not wear them due to his active lifestyle. (Although when he is older, he starts wearing those things more as he gets even more confident with his skills and abilities.)

The wings on his head, unlike most incubi in his family, have more prominent bony spike projections.


Personality
Alignment: LOE - Lawful-Offensive-Evil: The Dictator
(tendency to be more impartial when it comes to family, The Judge)

General Personality: Coman comes off as authoritative, self-assured, and oftentimes bossy and uncompromising. He's image-conscious and wants to be thought of as powerful, successful, and in control. As his own parents sacrificed their lives, giving up their own place in the line of succession, in order to give him life, he places great importance on family and power hierarchies. He cares for his family deeply and wants to do everything he can to ensure their well-being and success in life, even if it's contrary to what they want for themselves. He's a bit of an enforcer for the family that way.

The only authorities he puts above himself are his grandmother, Asuraj Adhir, the head of the Adhir Matriarchy, and his aunts. Coman is likewise ambitious for himself, and is a bit of a perfectionist when it comes to his own goals and self-image. He's very much a traditionalist, and often tries to find ways to adapt his heritage's traditions to work in the modern day.

Coman thinks very little of humans, and as a cambion, uses and treats humans and most other beings as food, fun, and fodder. Being the eldest of his brood's age cohort, Coman considers himself their leader and protector, often feeling that he must set the example for them in demon-human relations and all other things to do with living and "becoming a man". He otherwise likes stirring shit up with his cousin Jericho with Rammey in tow, or playing detective/bounty hunter, trying to track interesting targets down.

Good Traits: confident, ambitious, eye for detail, loyal, persistent, dedicated, usually a high level of self-control, meticulous
Bad Traits: irrational at times when it comes to family matters, cruel, prideful and spiteful to the point of irrationality, explosive temper, uncompromising, holds grudges

Quirks: easily annoyed by stains and wrinkles, often picks lint from pockets when hands are idling, hates when his hair is messy and always annoyed that he never has a comb on him, secretly wants to be a a detective or secret agent.
Hopes: For his family to live on forever. For Rammey to make something of himself (at the very least get educated). For Altaire to accept his family again so they can all hang. To one day start a family of his own and create his own legacy.
Fears: Losing family members, especially his grandmother and cousins. Losing favour from his grandmother.

Memorable Quote(s):
- We're blood! We're family! What is it you don't understand?!
- *frustrated sigh* What now, Rammey?
- What's news on the street, Rico?

Relationships
Mother: Lamijah Adhir (deceased)
Father: Rays Nader (deceased)
Cousins: Rammey, Altaire, and Jericho
Grandmother: Asuraj Adhir

Closest Friends: his cousins, especially Jericho
Enemies: demon hunters, anyone who is an obstacle for his family, anyone who gets in his way
Girlfriend(s)/Boyfriend(s): He has a lot of flings with girls for amusement, but at this point is not planning to have a family, so nothing serious ever lasts. He otherwise just uses girls.

Battle
Power(s): He is fairly strong physically, but prefers to keep himself clean either by using magic or using his gun.

Void Force Magic:
It acts very similar to telekinesis, as he can use it to physically manipulate the environment. However, it also has the added effect of "eating away" at objects on both a physical and metaphysical level. It's generally invisible and hard to detect since it's not a true "energy" source.
PROS: Powerful and destructive if used on a large scale. Difficult to detect and therefore avoid.
CONS: Uses up a lot of energy and overuse can start affecting the user as well (eats away at them).

Magic Enhanced Mobility:
Black Coma can use his mana reserves to give him more speed, agility, and even flight.
PROS: Increases mobility and allows him to traverse almost anywhere with flight at a high speed. Enhances all fighting and evasion abilities.
CONS: Drains mana reserves over time, which he needs to live. Can only use full abilities for 30 minutes before needing more victims.

Spiritual Drain:
Black Coma assaults the victim spiritually and drains them of their energy. This damages a person's spirit or soul over time and can be fatal, not to mention psychologically scarring.
PROS: Recharges mana reserves. Incapacitates victim (victim usually ends up unconscious or in a coma for at least a few days).
CONS: Sexual assault required (there's a lot of complicated reasons for this, but just know that this is the only thing that works for incubi). Damages the victim. Best sources are innocent or morally upstanding victims as this is a polar opposite to general demon/incubi nature (more contrast = more power).

Marksmanship:
As a precaution against magic-resistant foes and to hide his demonic nature, Black Coma usually carries around a gun, and has trained himself to use light, small firearms. He's proficient with using them, but isn't 100% accurate or anything.
PROS: Use of basic firearms and their maintenance, has decent aim and is able to take down regular humans and those weak to bullets.
CONS: Is not an expert shot, usually doesn't carry extra ammo, so can easily run out.

Weapon(s): Semi-automatic pistol, usually fully loaded for a night out.
Style: Long range, usually enjoys toying with a victim if he believes they are way outmatched, and will prolong a battle cruelly for amusement. Is otherwise not afraid to go all out with gun blazing and void blasts disintegrating! Fairly aggressive with little mercy.
Strengths: Very powerful magically, and a good judge of his own limitations in battle. Usually has very high stamina, which also boosts his recovery rate if injured in battle. If low on mana and bullets, is comfortable with needing to use his fists. He's therefore fairly versatile having magic, a gun, and physical strength.
Weaknesses: Can easily run out of bullets if facing a magically resistant foe, leaving him empty-handed except for fists, which he is not really trained to fight with. If low on mana, his wings may come out, making him vulnerable as they are very sensitive (a bullet through them can knock him unconscious from the pain).

Background:
Coman was born from the union of his succubus mother, Lamijah Adhir, and incubus father, Rays Nader. When these two demons mate, the male's soul is absorbed and he dies. The female then carries the child to term and she grows weaker as the child develops, until she finally dies and the child is born. Cambions are twice as powerful as normal incubi or succubi, but also require twice as much energy to survive.

His mother was actually the next in line to become the leader of the Adhir Matriarchy, the demon line of succubi. Had she survived, he would have become the next in line to lead if his mother did not later produce a daughter before she died (and if he became leader, this would flip the Adhir Matriarchy into the Adhir Patriarchy). However, on his mother's death, his place in the line vanished (it now is set to go down to Nuraj and eventually to Altaire!).

Instead, he was raised by his grandmother, Asuraj, the current Adhir Matriarchy leader to pretty much be her own loyal retainer and watchdog. He believes that his parents planned for his birth and willingly sacrificed their lives in order to create him to become an eternal and powerful guardian for the family line, as this was the role for most cambions in demonic history. Unbeknownst to him, his birth was more accidental as his parents didn't realize each other's demonic blood until it was too late. Lamijah actually fell into a deep depression and tried to find ways to rid herself of her ill-fated pregnancy, but as punishment for her foolishness, and as not to waste both lives, Asuraj forced Lamijah to carry Coman to term.

Coman was later was joined by his cousins Jericho and Rammey. As they were all within a few years of each other, it became expected of them to play, feed, and learn together. As Coman was eldest, he took it upon himself to be the leader of the group and tried his best to set a good example, often becoming strict with traditions and rules, just as Asuraj had taught him. He and Jericho are closest as they were nearest in age, and often have good rapport with one another, as Jericho often deferred to Coman's wishes. Rammey was still fairly young and was often the target of bullying from the other two, although Coman always made sure to include Rammey in activities out of a sense of responsibility and familial affection.

Their trio grew when Altaire arrived, and Coman was happy to help guide the confused and frightened kid. Unfortunately, as Altaire got older, he became increasingly resistant and even disrespectful toward his family! This caused a lot of conflict within the group and Coman became furious when Altaire decided to abandon the family altogether and run away. Coman helped track Altaire down multiple times, until Altaire's mother finally decided to let Altaire live on his own. Coman reluctantly acknowledged his aunt's wishes, but still checks up on Altaire from time to time to make sure he hasn't lost sight of who he is completely.

Coman otherwise carries out dirty work for his grandmother or stirs up trouble with Jericho and Rammey. This includes hunting down females to sexually assault, mug people for money, murder people for fun, or whatever else it is young people do these days.

Villainous Motivations:
He is a demon and is proud of it and he wants the world to recognize that. His goals include keeping his family safe and in power, serve his grandmother, and create a legacy of his own. If that means that he has to prove his superiority to every other being through violence, rape, and murder, then so be it. He's unapologetic about his loyalties and ambitions and the suffering of people outside his concern weigh little to nothing in his mind.

NOTE: Why "Black Coma"? Because it plays off "Black Plague" and also the image of death, and how incubi leave their victims either dead or in comas. Also, it plays on the astronomy theme that Silver Zodiac has going on. A "coma" is also known as the cloudy ice/dust envelop around a comet! The more you know! Plus.. Coma => Coman? SO MUCH SENSE IT MAKES!

The best way to get me to RP? Draw pictures of my OCs interacting with your OCs and I'll feel obligated to write a comment, fave, and have my character react. LOL
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:icontfsu-samano:
TFSU-Samano Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
I'm getting a hero killer vibe from this one, Me Like.
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Meibatsu Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha, thanks!

Yeah, he's pretty powerful and scary and causes a lot of trouble in a few years.
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TFSU-Samano Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Perfect character that could Kick Hiro off his High Horse, even could give The other IWA Leaders a hard time without their teammates or allies next to that.
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Meibatsu Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah! He gets pretty powerful before he finally dies.
I am also making another demon villain at some point.
But I just have so much artwork to doooo.. lol
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TFSU-Samano Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Does this mean that it would be a requirement for Hiro to be in his True Form, or he needed a buddy to fight against him?

Just asking.
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Meibatsu Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Probably when he gets stronger, yeah!
Right now, he'd probably be able to be defeated if he was ganged up by 3 people with regular superpowers.
But in a few years when he gets even stronger, it gets difficult to take him down.
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TFSU-Samano Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Is he the kind of person that takes jobs from Criminal Factions like the Dark Allegaince or another free agent.
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Meibatsu Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, he really only listens to his grandmother, but sometimes he will do side business deals if he thinks something's in it for him.
I guess it depends on the job and what they offer him because he wants ot one day create his own legacy and become big and powerful and famous.
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Ortensia12 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Bloodlust: *looks at him* Hellooooooooo hottie!
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Meibatsu Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Coman: And you are? *looks Bloodlust up and down*
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starisis9 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
Sekh : *looking at Coman* O_o...:eyes: *smirk* Well now, aren't you interesting.


XD Sekh is pretty open when it comes to other non human creatures, even so with boys. Probably be floored when she found out he and Ash are related. Sek would probably be interested and maybe even more so after she found he was a villian after all nothing hotter than bad guy x superhero game of cat and mouse. Just as Batman and Catwoman ^__^.

Seriously great job
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Meibatsu Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Com: *raises brow and looks Sekh over, speak with a monotone but slightly sarcastic voice* Am I? *walks up to her to look down at her* And who would you be?

Hahaha.. she is attracted to danger is she?
Well, he's interested in conquest as long as he thinks the girl is worth it~! He certainly likes challenges and overcoming them, anyway.

And thanks! xD
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starisis9 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012
Sekh: *smirk* Its to introduce yourself first but I'll make an exception this once *shrugs but smiles* . My name is Sekhmet *tilts head to the side looking him up and down* and who might you be ?

Yep that she is, she like challenges as well, most boys are actually intimated by her lol

YW XD
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Meibatsu Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Com: Sekhmet. That's an interesting name. Sounds mythological. *smiles and raises brows a bit in curiosity* My name's not important for you to know. And if it is, you eventually find out. *nods slightly and turns to leave*
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starisis9 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012
Sekhmet: Heh something like that. Oh, really? *chuckles and turns* Then I look forward to that meeting *smiles* Eventually ,that is .*opens wings making a slight show, so it forces him to look back and then takes off into the air and flies away in the opposite direction*

I have an urge to draw them now XD. May I? I will of course give the credit to you for your OC
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Meibatsu Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Com: *turns head black slightly to see that she took flight, blinks in amusement* Hm. *continues on his way to meet up with cousins*

Do it do it! LOL
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starisis9 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012
Already done , take a look XD
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Vibiana Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Look at him. All cool with an awesome name and freaking bat wings sticking out of his head. >_>
Are you giving all of Alt's cousins profiles now?
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Meibatsu Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You know it~~!

Yeah..! Well, the three that matter. XD
Put more boys AND villains into the group, you know? LOL
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Vibiana Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Yus.
I FIND THE MALE TO FEMALE RATIO IN THIS GROUP DISTURBING.
I think that's why almost all my characters are dudes. And there's another one on the way...
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Meibatsu Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I AM GUESSING CUZ SO MANY WANT TO GET WITH ROBIN OR KF!! XD

Haha.. yess!! More men!! MOREE!!
Most of my dudes are badguys though. I am concerned people will want to go for rapists. Maybe I will have to throw in a couple more goodGUYS... >___>
Though these is the issue of which other underutilized/unimportant character I should bring in.. xD
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Vibiana Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
MAKES SENSE.

The only two chicks I have are bad buys. XD
It's okay if most of your dudes are villains. Good girls do want bad boys after all. >_>
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MyDearBasil Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I saw the name in the thumbnail, not recognizing it was Coman and went "Oh, that's a good villain name!" LOL AND NOW IT'S EVEN MORE FITTING!
BUTTTT NOOOOOOOO!
WHYYYYY!
HE THINKS HIS PARENTS WANTED HIM WHEN THEY DIDN'T EVEN, NOOO! THAT'S SO SADDDD! COMAN'S JUST A PRECIOUS ORPHANED BABYYY!! ;____; POORR BABBYYYY! AND NOW HE DOES ASURAJ'S DIRTY WORK! NOOOO!
AND THEN THE FUTURE IS BLEAK FOR HIM TOOOOOO....!
HE JUSTS WANTS FAMILY AND BABIEESSS!! WHYYYY! Q________Q
WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO MY HEART! XD
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Meibatsu Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL.. yes!! NOW it's so obvious it's him.. Coma Coman.. XD

YESSS!!! I wonder if he eventually finds out through some offhand comment. >___> Maybe he snaps! HAHAHAA~~
I know!! He was first made just to be a douchey cousin, but wheels start spinning and motivations get added and suddenly he's a sympathetic villain! Q___Q

BECAUSE THE TRUE VILLAIN IN THIS UNIVERSE IS ACTUALLY ME! HAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAA //EVILCRUELTY
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MyDearBasil Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
CLEVVVERR!
For a moment, I also forgot how commas were spelled. xD THE BLACK COMMA. DUNNNANA!

Oh god, nooo! HE'LL BE CRUSHED!! q___q baby!
uFFHKF, I am a sucker for sympathetic villains!! And in the end he has such selfless goals anyways!

I KNNNNEEWWWWW IT, YOU FIEEEEENDDDDDD!!!!!! AND POOR RAMMEY TOOOO!! THE YOUTTHHHH! THE INNOCENT YOUUTTHH!
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Meibatsu Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha!!! Well, maybe he is a stickler for punctuation too. XD SUITS HIS PERSONALITY!

Don't be sucked in~~~! It's part of the fatal seduction~~! xD

BWAHAHAA.. AND NOTHING THOSE GOODY GOODIES DO WILL BE ABLE TO STOP MEEEE~~~
AND YOU SHOULD TALK, MISSUS ALEXIS MURDERER!
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MyDearBasil Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
BECAUSE HE'S PUNCTUAL? OOHHHHH! xD

NO, I AM SO EASILY SUCKED IN! He should just carry his back story written on his shirt! Reel in all the ladies! xD

NOOOOOOOOO! IT HAD TOOO BEEE DONNNEEEEE...! SHE'S TOO GOOD FOR THIS AWFUL WORLD!
YOU'VE STILL SPILLED MORE BLOOD THEN ME! OOHHH!
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Meibatsu Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
PUNCTU-PUNS!! NOOO...! XD

He doesn't want ladies who feel sorry for him or who think he's weak and deserves hugs! xD

I SPILL "BADGUY" BLOOD... mostly.. ..... SOKAY! XD
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MyDearBasil Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
YOU KNOW IT!

but but but.. they'd be so much more willing!
BUT HE DOES!
HE DOES DESERVE HUGS! XD

AUBURN TEDDY-BEAR MEN AREN'T BAD GUYS! Q_Q
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Meibatsu Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Coman: I don't need them willing.

THEY ARE THE BADDEST OF BAD!!! xD
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SAmaryllis Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh nooooo! What a terribly tragic, complicated family. WHY CAN'T THEY ALL JUST GET ALONG AND BE A HAPPY FAMIRY TOGETHER AHHHHHHHHHHH ;____;

I was actually going to ask "what if an incubus and succubus don't realize and make baby" BUT YOU COVERED THAT hahahah~ So they can't really sense other demons, then? O:
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Meibatsu Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
BECAUSE BADGUYS GET KARMA-WHACKED IN MY WORLD~~~! XD
It's the price they pay for having power and wanting to be irresponsible with it (even though it's really not their fault in the beginning to be born in such a family.. lolol)

Nope! They usually can't unless they're specifically trained to. Especially since most incubi and succubi pass for humans under most circumstances too.
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merit Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
I knew he couldn't be Hiryuu on that thumbnail! That body language, the more lanky build, and the clothing colour! LOOOL
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Meibatsu Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahha.. Hiryuu isn't allowed in because he would probably steal too much attention and his story is too complicated involving too many characters with even more complicated stories! XD I would cry having to explain it all... hahaha~~!

Yeah.. Hiryuu doesn't hand-in-pockets and purple? non. LOL He was this build when he was 15. LOL
Hiryuu would have started out pretty pathetic though.. >_> Kind of unskilled, but intelligent, but huge brooding and temper issues.. and then he keeps crashing his motorcycle. >____>
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merit Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
Yah he's not very uhm.. attractive at 15 with those terrible skills LOOOOL
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