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I enjoy this piece. It's eyegrabbing from the start and shows a lot of personality of the pilot. Very realistic without going overboard...

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I enjoy this piece. It's eyegrabbing from the start and shows a lot of personality of the pilot. Very realistic without going overboard. The colors used for shading on the pilot are well done on over 90% of her skin.

Onto the small tweaks!

The shading of the skin just above the waist is a tiny bit off. (Compare it to the shading on the pants. On the legs you get a real sense of roundness that the spots where fabric and skin meet lacks.)

I'm a big fan of using shading to pop everything. There's only a few things I can say about it here. First, the light source seems a little off when it comes to the light facing side in spots. (Arm shadow on helmet missing, parts of the wing are a bit light on the detail shading making it hard to tell if round or flat, etc.)

A little more contrast in shadow from the top of the wings when compared to the bottom would help.

The height of the wing seems the same as the view line. (Top and bottom look identical suggesting the viewer is the same height as the center of the wing. Just doesn't make much sense if you think like an engineer and compare it to the nose of the ship.)

I love her face, hair, and that tiny smirk. :D Great job!

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kevinsano Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2019  Professional Digital Artist
thanks for the watch
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3wyl Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2019  Hobbyist General Artist
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XennerdRequiem Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the watch! :D :+devwatch: 
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jerife Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks for your watch Meenkie!
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StallionDesigns Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2018   Photographer
Thank you for the Watch. :) (Smile) 
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BlizzySnowolf Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the watch! <3
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KevoGlumDraws Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2018
Thank you so much for Watch Me ;P
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Cordaello Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2018
Thank you for the watch, I appreciate it kaomoji set 1 9/19 
I hope you have a nice day kaomoji set 2 28/67 
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sawill77 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for adding a :+devwatch:
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Yomacs Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the watch :D :D :D
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