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Count St. Germant, Animamundi: Dark Alchemist. by MechanicalPencl Count St. Germant, Animamundi: Dark Alchemist. by MechanicalPencl
My first upload.

Now with the auto-critique: The folds in clothing are a weak point of mine; someone should give the poor man a deodorant, the blood vessels of an ultradimensional horror are crawling from his armpits. The upper portion seems to be wider than the lower; is not a new ocurrence; i don't know if that is an artifact of the scanner or a mistake i consistenly overlook. Simple background because i'm lazy. The upper edge of the bush is not parallel with the lower (or the upper for that matter) edge of the drawing. I misinterpreted the reference i was looking for and so the jacket is slightly different. I shouldn't have colored the interior of the sleeve solid black. Bishoonen style is weird, characters are too tall and thin; i think i failed to convey the feminity of the style. The lens of the glasses (specially the left one) are not circles (i tried to use a compass but i didn't close enough). It was a mistake to restrain his hair to the inside of the collar, i think the bulging of the hair is realistic but is perhaps not very aesthetic. The density of leaves is greater in the left side than the right side.

Criticism appreciated.
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Girlfoxgirl Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2015  Student Writer
Haha, very fun. I like it! Fun pose, I feel like I should shake his hand. =D Thanks very much for drawing him for me, that was kind of you.
Very detailed self-critique, there. Your self-awareness seems like a very good sign that you're in a position for exponential growth. I wish you great luck in future endeavors. ^^
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MechanicalPencl Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2015
Thanks for your kindness, and for having made a request. In my mind he's lending a hand to help someone stand up, i don't know his personality as i have never played Animamundi. Be well. :)
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Girlfoxgirl Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2015  Student Writer
He totally would. And no problem, it is a very obscure game. =D
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MechanicalPencl Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2015
Forgot to mention: This drawing took way longer than it should have had; i know the reason, is because whenever i got to a challenging part i procrastinated as a way of psychologically avoiding it, most likely because of fear of it being to difficult; need to get rid of such impressions but i don't know how.
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