Well....it's looking better I think, the reflection on the girl certainly add to the sci-fi/futuristic feel. I especially like the reflections on the leg "protectors". Very well done....theyr'e so shiny!
Also the face looks alot better with a more likelike coulour and the HUD reflecting on her forehead
Nice touch. I also think the bikes tyre looks better,blurry and realistic.
I also not you changed the sky abit.... I like the appearnce of the other one more though, it is slightly darker and I think fits in better with the "dark city" feel.