[201] Smoke and Haze

As of posting there's prob like a couple hours left for the critique request journal. More info below! 

Offering Critiques!! [read before commenting!]Just hit day 200 in my daily doodle project, what better time to open for critiques?!
So if any of you remember, a few weeks ago I posted a poll that was basically asking/suggesting that I would be open to giving critiques to you guys! 

Offering Critiques -> This means: I will look at your art and then give you the critique. 
(just clarifying that I am not asking for critiques of my art just in case if people are confused!)

This is the first time I'm offering critiques on dA and I may potentially get a lot of requests, or none! So this could get a bit messy. Please bare with me and I'm sorry ahead of time if I can't get to you! 
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If I get too many requests that's not humanly possible to do:
The first 2 commenters will for sure get a critique from me; assuming they follow the directions of course
The rest will be put into a randomizer and I'll choose from there! 
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1.) Postin

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