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[GIFT] Lillitu (OC)

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HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY, :iconthe-winterrose: ^^
was supposed to be a christmas gift but we all know how my december went ^^;
so instead you get your birthday gift a few days early :tighthug:
hope you like her ^^



OC belongs to :iconthe-winterrose:
pose/throne loosely inspired by 'the birth of venus' by Botticelli
(loosely!)



watercolors and PITT ink pen



feel free to check out my commission sheet if you like my art style ^^
Image size
1085x1470px 1.09 MB
Make
Apple
Model
iPhone SE
Shutter Speed
1/33 second
Aperture
F/2.2
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
50
Date Taken
Dec 30, 2017 3:50:34 PM +01:00
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Hei there!Constructivecomment   
Overall I must say that I really love the character style. I got really caught by this drawing in preview and I just had to add a comment for you ^^
Well, I would like to start with the seat. I have nothing wrong to say about that, I really love how you managed to keep all the textures - I would just note that the smaller, almost invisible leg should be darker than the ohers, probably a different shadow. The rest of the throne is just awesome! ^^
You know, now I am getting to one major flaw - I have no idea where is your light source or to what direction the shadows and highlights are supposed to be,I am really confused, for your light seems to be coming from everywhere :D Next time I would suggest you to define where your light is coming from at the beginning - I know it is hard - I am always forgetting too.
Let's continue with the characted itself.... I would say that hte dress looks pretty realistic! The way the cloth folds is awesome! ^^ Her right leg is really good but her left leg... that one looks like drawn fromslightly different angle. I wold suggest looking at more references to get that right. That applies also to her torso which is just weird. I cannot really decide what is wrong with that, but probably her left shoulder hould be differenciated from her boob... I do not know. 
What I have to note is that her right hand looks way too much thin, anorexic. I would suggest you to not make that thin next time, it is really disturbing. 
To her facce, I do not really have anything to say, for I really like the style! ^^ Big eyes are a really nice feature. To her hair - I must say, pretty impressive! ^^ But there come all the highlights - I mean, either make whole picture that much shiny ar do not malke the hair that shiny. Not in all places. Her hair looks like there was light coming from everywhere :D Beware of that next time :)
I must say that I really like this piece :) I hope my comment helped a bit ^^
Have a nice day :)