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[Undertale] Detour pg 33 by Maxx2DXtreame [Undertale] Detour pg 33 by Maxx2DXtreame
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:icontonicthehedgehog115:
tonicthehedgehog115 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2018
sans might have F'd up.
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NobodyFamous Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2018
Their eye color is different, isn't it?

Something I noticed highlighted is that the Human!Frisk has red eyes. We saw that in the beginning and then again here. In their shots there was emphasis on their eyes and how red they are.

But Monster!Frisk hasn't opened their eyes this whole time so there's no telling what color their eyes are.
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SoulerClash Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This comic is so amazing!!!! :heart:

I love it! :heart:

*fangirling intensifies* (chat icon) 
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:iconmaxx2dxtreame:
Maxx2DXtreame Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh thank you, I see you're a new reader.
Welcome and enjoy the read.
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SoulerClash Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just saw the replies notifications and realized they all end with 3! XD

3,23 and 33! XD

Anyways, i am loving your comic a lot! :D
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Phuindrad Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
Wait... did Sans just hit a blind child?
(Hoping that this Frisk is a good an nice Child let me stay determined.)
By the way this never runs out of surprises.
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:iconnaehja:
Naehja Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2018
She seems nice for now.
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:iconphuindrad:
Phuindrad Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
Ah good.
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:iconmikaylab789:
mikaylab789 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2018  Hobbyist
Did frisk just walk into Sans' fist because they didn't see it? coz he stopped his punch before it hit them 
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:iconcatcrazie:
catCrazie Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have a feeling that the monster frisket has bad eyesight, but that doesn't make sense
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:iconnaehja:
Naehja Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2018
In the previous page, Human!Sans apologizes to have been in their way, so it could make sens if they are almost blind (or blind)

An it would explain what happened here. 
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catCrazie Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
True! Maybe they have their arms like that to feel if they are about to hit something.
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pinkjumprope Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2018
Reset? Maybe? After all if humans have magic then monsters have...umm...soul power? We know that a red soul can reset, so what if a light blue soul could pause time? What if that's what Sans did, and was shocked by it (he can't use magic so why would he be able to do anything)? Who know, I'm just going to sit here until the next page is up. With any luck Sans will finish that sentence. 
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Ausans8080 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
Did they just what?
*has barely any knowledge of what's going on*
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wildcats11085 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
LOL I can relate to that.
(thinks of the time when drawing a peaceful grassy patch from UT, and sans genocide theme song playing loudly )
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SilverWolf915 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 12, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
> Act
> Fake Hit

or i suppose in this case fake injury. at least i assume thats what they did, because Frisk seems to have halted, but still seems to feign being hit and fell

Edit: srry, Sans stopped himself from hitting this Frisk. still, it seems they faked getting hit
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:iconnaehja:
Naehja Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2018
or Frisk has a bad eyesight/are almost blind/are blind and have not seen the fist? 
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SilverWolf915 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Frisk always has their eyes closed though and it was never proved in canon Frisk is blind or has poor eyesight, not to mention it's also rare for an AU to dub Frisk blind. consider MK's reaction, they either faked being hit or they slipped from being startled at Sans abruptly throwing a punch towards him
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:iconnaehja:
Naehja Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2018
Well, it's not canon!frisk here, it's a monster version XD
And in the previous page, they run into Humain!Sans who says "sorry I was in the way" or something.
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SilverWolf915 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
oh yes, thats true i forgot about that. maybe their eyesight is bad
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YaniMay Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
Is Frisk...blind?
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Scottthespy Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2018
Man I just want this poor Sans to get to meet the duo from my AU...they'd be able to help him with all that pent up hurt.

Meanwhile, a halted punch, a 'tap' of contact, and and overblown reaction. Yet Sans's expression...you might expect him to look victorious or vindicated if the kid HAD just headbutted his fist to make it look like he hit them, not confused and slightly guilty. And how would this Frisk have had any idea that this Sans was about to punch the air, if this WAS a manipulation tactic? This Frisk has known this Sans for all of a few minutes, most of which he spent trying to do magic and failing at doing anything useful. He's nothing like the Human Sans, so Monster Frisk can't well use knowledge of one for the other. So, which is it? A lucky moment to take advantage of to trick others into thinking SekeleSans is attacking, or...

Well, Monsters ARE fragile...your intent to harm, your anger, can do damage to even the strong ones. SkeleSans punched the air with a great deal of anger and hate in mind...could Monster Frisk have accidentally walked into his fist and taken damage from the lingering wish to harm the kid that Sans still held? 
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GAMVO15 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2018
Nice thought process on the whole scenario... But I think personally that it could be manipulation to make sans looks bad. I mean we clearly know he didn't mean to hit them... They just got too close at an inconvenient time. I mean it could just be coincidental, but I don't know.
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Scottthespy Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2018
If it is manipulation, MonsterFrisk got lucky with the timing. There's no way they had enough data to know SkeleSans was in a 'fight the air to blow of steam' kind of mood. I just feel like the manipulator role is the twist we're all expecting, and I'm wondering if maybe this is one of those double twists.
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NobodyFamous Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2018
I don't think it's manipulation. Sans's expression would be more outraged or annoyed if he's being blamed for fighting when Monster!Frisk is manipulating. Also, Monster!Frisk has no cause to try to make him look bad at this point.

It looks more like Sans stopped his hit before he could connect with Monster!Frisk, but they kept going and ended up bumping into his fist. Sans looks and sounds too confused over the interaction--not upset or angry or annoyed, just confused. And Monster!Frisk fell back in surprise, but isn't crying or upset, just seems to be rubbing their face the way anybody would when they bump face-first into something.

An overall misunderstanding, but not manipulation. There's also the strange way that Monster!Frisk is walking here and the matter that Monster!Frisk has their eyes closed. Perhaps they didn't see and walked into it by accident.
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:iconnaehja:
Naehja Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2018
I pretty agree with you, it's more a accident than anything.
Maybe that Frisk has a bad eyesight too. 
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JewishJellyDonut Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2018
if it's a twist, i hope it's a double twist
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:iconnaehja:
Naehja Featured By Owner Edited Aug 11, 2018
I mean WE know, but Monster Frisk didn't, they have stopped brutally and slip on the snow.  We know that Sans didn't really want to hit the kid, but the kid didn't know and he has been scared, and has tried to back of and slipped. From Friks's point of view, Sans was going to hit them.

or the kid is more or less blind. It would explain with they walk like that and why they have "run" into the fist.  Or why they have blood on them and doesn't seem concerned about it.
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PeaceHorizon Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Monster frisk may turn out to be the manipulating villain
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JewishJellyDonut Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2018
probably but i hope not
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:iconcoralshields:
CoralShields Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2018
Did Monster Frisk just fake being hit? No wait...there was a tap. So is Monster Frisk pretending to be hurt?
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GAMVO15 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2018
Think i'd mention, I was just throwing my ideas out there, spitballing really, it could end up similar to any of the original endings with little twists or it could be like a couple endings combined, or none... It's all up to the creative mind of Maxx here. I still like to try to think outside the box though if I can.
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:iconhandybud:
HandyBud Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Did monster frisk try and make UT Sans feel better?
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:iconnaehja:
Naehja Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2018
or maybe it's a childish's reaction "you pretended to hit me? Fine I pretend to have been hitten then!"
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:iconhandybud:
HandyBud Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Exactly they heard sans ranting about his life so to make him feel like he has purpose they play along
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GAMVO15 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2018
Nice ending and all... But what about the fact that it really isn't over thanks to the determination that the human child possesses. Yeah.... It's on now. So in a layman's terms they are all screwed. Joking aside, there is something funny in all this... We all know frisk isn't really "the" villian, if we are using undertale mechanics and whatnot into the mix, it's the person playing as frisk who's the "bad guy", all that really was what we saw was a game over for the player in frisk's death. And we already know based on the whole determination balogna, the player/frisk is totally immortal, so the humans tricks will get trite and predictable if this whole things continues, and boom you killed everything, successful geno run, now Chara either kills you and the world... Or the world still dies, hope you sleep well at night you villainous player you! Lol. Had to get that out there, it seems about right, if there is a parallel in this story. maybe... Just maybe the human Frisk changes a new leaf, things get better, so on so forth... Or not.. Seriously though great comic so far.
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asthonman Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2018
People STILL think the human Frisk is the one in control of time here?
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:iconmaxx2dxtreame:
Maxx2DXtreame Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I like how you just blatantly called it waddling over XD
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:icondarsywolf:
DarsyWolf Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I didn't know what to call that walk motion, sorry. XD
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:iconmodelomegatyler:
ModelOmegaTyler Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2018
wait, so if sans stopped an inch from hitting them why did they fall over? is this frisk making others fight? does sans still have some powers?
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tomas5250 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2018
perfect
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:icontomas5250:
tomas5250 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2018
nice work
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Fritsw13 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2018
sans no 
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butter12345 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sans what have you done
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LazyLeech Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2018
hmm, maybe if you use pizza and beer the jaws will go away.
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