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bey108 for this Gary Stu evaluation. Figured I should do this one for the Lucario for the heck of it. :3
Character: Max (Human<->Lucario)1. [] They are possessed by an angel. 2. [] They are possessed by a demon. 3. [] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.4. [] They are physically strong.5. [] They have a rare hair/fur colour.6. [] Their eyes are an unusual colour.
(His eyes are black and it's not a norm for a Lu, but he's a human so he gets a pass on that)7. [] This eye colour happens to be red. 8. [] Their eyes change colour.9. [] They have wings.10. [] They can grow extra body parts/shape-shift.
(Mega Evolve doesn't count, does it? lol)11. [] They are immortal.12. [] [If female.] They have a large breast size. 13. [] [If male.] They are very muscular.14. [] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.15. [] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc. 16. [] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc.
(He does have aura but that's the species attribute so that doesn't count)17. [] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.18. [] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet.19. [] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers. 20. [] They are a healer. 21. [] They are from a very rich/royal family. 22. [] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background. 23. [] They have lost one/both of their parents. 24. [] They ran away from home.25. [] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. 26. [] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death.27. [x] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature. (The Pokemon part counts I guess)
28. [] They never knew their parents.29. [] They were abused/spoiled as a child. 30. [] They are very attractive to the same gender. 31. [] They have lots of friends/no friends.
(The Society and 3 other human teams. That doesn't sound lot.)32. [] They are emo/cutesy.33. [] They look much younger/older than they really are.34. [] They are currently in a relationship. 35. [] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit. 36. [x] They have a mental disorder. Anxiety and OCD
(OCD, yes.)37. [] They have an emotional disorder. 38. [] They struggle to stay sane. 39. [] They are a psycho. 40. [] They have multiple personalities. 41. [] They are very intelligent42. [] They have hallucinations. 43. [] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.44. [] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet. 45. [x] They have a guardian spirit.
(Mew)46. [] They have a 'special type' of soul. 47. [] Their soul is not the same as them. 48. [] They can talk to spirits/demons/angels etc.49. [] Some part of their body glows.50. [] They have a rare/unusual name.51. [] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc52. [] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age. 53. [] They are connected with a certain element. 54. [] They are connected with a certain animal. 55. [] They always dress like a certain "labels"56. [] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga (FC Pokemon, so that doesn't count)57. [] They are a race/species that is discriminated/against/misunderstood. 58. [] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared. 59. [] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives.60. [] They are hiding from someone/something.61. [] They have a rare blood type. 62. [] They cry blood.63. [] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown.64. [] They are from a different country to where they live.65. [] They are very mysterious/dark. 66. [x] They are very lively/happy.67. [] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly.68. [x] They are very patient.69. [] They are from a long line of assassins. 70. [x] They have a piece of jewellery/clothing that they always wear. (A bracelet with his mega stone as a Lucario.)71. [] They have amnesia.72. [] They have some sort of harmful curse upon them. 73. [] They are involved in some sort of prophecy. 74. [x] They are 'the chosen one'.75. [] They have insomniaOverall Points : 6======Point Reduction :: Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements :1. [] They smoke. 2. [] They are an alcoholic.3. [] They are overweight. 4. [] They are addicted to drugs. 5. [] They have a short temper. 6. [] They enjoy bullying others. 7. [] They do not care much about others.8. [] They are relatively emotionless. 9. [/] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.(He's short sighted even as a Lucario and somehow has his glasses with him).Total: 0.5======Final Score :: 5.5RESULT :: (Barely) Anti-SueSomehow I think this list didn't ask the right questions that potentially makes him more Stu-ish. But a 5.5 and barely balanced, considering the somewhat incompatible questions, I'll take that.
05 :: Anti-Sue.Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit. 06-15 :: Balanced Character. If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though. 16-25 :: Borderline Mary-Sue. We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too. 26 :: Mary-Sue. Please revise your character... NOW.======
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