mattkrotzer

I decided that I'd work on my pacing and storytelling a bit and try reworking a page that I didn't think was especially successful. (No offense to the original writer/artist pair, both of whom I admire greatly.) Page 4 on Teen Titans #12 really jumped out at me as having some unusual choices in focal points and story beats, so I made that my project. I made some notes on dialogue that I'd tweak, and I got the basic thumbnails hammered out pretty quickly. I like where it's going, though the finishes are obviously taking me a bit longer than I was hoping for. I got a bit of conversation with the original artist, Brett Booth, over some costumin