Well, I was going to say something like, "This is a really cute picture, and I like the color scheme, but you spelled peaceful and sense wrong."
But then I saw that all you did was take someone else's lineart and throw some shitty coloring and words onto it. Seriously. The LEAST you could do is check the spelling before you throw something so half-assed out onto the internet to be seen by all.
If you had put any effort into this, I would not have even said anything.