Mary Jane becomes the Black Cat - Origin 09

Here I am, continuing with the story.   
 
Kingpin is really ruthless, but it seems to have a "soft side" with young ladies, so he keeps Mary Jane prisioner until he can find a use for her. That arrives when Kingpin and Landon initiate the operation to kidnap John Hardesky and give them the formula of the Super-Soldier. Instead of going after Felicia, Kingpin decides to use Mary Jane as the first text subject, and warns Hardesky that his daughter could be the next one if something goes wrong. Afraid of his daughter getting in danger, and seeing in MJ a young ladie who COULD be his daughter, Hardesky has no options.   
 
The improved version of the Super-Soldier's formula is used on Mary Jane, and John Hardesky trains her as cat burglar; the results are really impressing. Kingpin manages to keep Mary Jane under his command under threat of kidnapping her aunt Anna or any of her friends. Mary Jane is not really happy with the situation. Eventually, it comes the moment where Hardesky helps Mary Jane to excape, so she can find help to stop Kingpin. MJ thanks Hardesky, and it seems she has develped somekind of "parental bonding" with him. (No surprise, considering how Mary Jane's father was).   
 
So, what do you think of this?