Ashley and Jenny II - Part 1

I am the original scripter of this story, and I give both Batjap and TrainerAshandRed35 a lot of thanks for their help in bringing it to life. However, I couldn't avoid to notice a couple of errors in the pictures, so I asked TrainerAshandRed35 if I could make a few changes on them. She allowed me, so I did them.  
 
This is the first part of the story.