- The scanner f*cked up the colours... It made Misty's hair colour look too dark, and the sky colour too light...
- The sky colouring looks messy.
- Ash's head should've been a bit bigger.
- Togetic looks a bit too big.
Example: in this drawing you have colored the sand a lovely yellowish gold. I can see that you very carefully covered the whole space, but your coloring marks go up and down the paper vertically. When you get to the characters they go all over the place. this makes it very hard to feel that the sand is a flat surface they are standing on. if you make sure that all your coloring marks go the same direction, and for a flat surface i would advise horizontally across the paper, you will see a dramatic difference in how well the color blends together and how much it looks like a ground.
Hope this helps! Keep practicing!
Thanks! Did you notice how Ash is gushing over Misty's boobies? xD
Well, yeah, it's hard, because when I colour, I don't want to colour outside the lineart. For example, I don't want to make Ash's and Misty's legs sand-yellow. And so, I try to colour in the direction that's beneficial to the characters. A result of this is that the characters often look better than the background...
Look again and see if you can notice it. xD
One creepy thing: I once showed this drawing at someone on Serebiiforums, and this guy said "OMG, that bikini and that midriff.......it's so sexy...dammut that's hot. And nice work on the cleavage." It was funny, but also a little sad: this drawing was meant to be more than just Misty's belly and boobies...
Yeah, this drawing was made to be funny. Look at Ash's blush!
Yeah... Gushing over a girl isn't wrong, but they shouldn't put looks above personality.
I'm a total opposite of Brock: I never watched porn/hentai, have no desire to try it, and I rarely see girls as hot. In fact, I only see my girlfriend as hot and no other girls. A female friend on DeviantArt who used to be hot for me wasn't hot for me anymore since the moment I fell for my girlfriend. I don't need other girls for sexiness, I only see my girlfriend as hot and that's enough for me. I can see other girls as cute, pretty and/or cool, but not as sexually attractive.