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A figure darted through the forest in a blur, only stopping to hide behind the occasional bush and look around. Panting some they stopped at a tall tree and slumped down to rest. “things were getting to hectic...glad I’m finally rid of that problem” they said. By the sound of the voice, the figure was identified as a girl. The sound of something whirling through the air was heard and the girl ducked. She moved a little too late and had a few strands of her brown hair clipped from one of her pigtails.


“Trespasser!” shouted a shrill voice. This time the girl saw three throwing stars come right at her and she crawled away into a bush.


“what the hell?!” she roared, standing straight up.


“Nyachu!!” called the shrill voice once more. Out of a tree leaped a small girl in a black skintight suit with her arms, lower abdomen and legs wrapped in white bandages. “you’re on Akatsuki territory!” she yelled, charging at the intruder. Instead of landing a hit on her, the attacker found herself smashed against a beyond large pair of breasts and being held tight enough to nearly crack her spine.


“Kyaaa~! You’re cute! Super cute! No, not super cute! You’re simply kawaaiiiiii!!” squealed the pigtailed girl.


“Nya! Nyaaaa! Lemme go!! Just who are you?!” cried the attacker. The hugger dropped the bandaged femme fatale and smirked.


“I am the great teller of tales! The mistress of the pen! I am Maru-sha! But most call me Maru” she introduced, striking a sexy pose.


“Nyaaaa?” chirped the dumfounded attacker. She was really expecting a real introduction of that magnitude.


“And who might you be, my bandaged cutie?” Maru asked, a glint in her eyes.


“I am the Aijou of the Akatsuki! My name is Karla, Nyaa~!” she mewled, smiling a fang-toothed grin. Maru’s eyes glimmered and she began to suffocate Karla against her breasts again in yet another hug.


“Damn it all, you’re sooo cute!!” she squealed, mashing Karla’s head deeper into her ‘abyss’.


“C-can’t breathe!!”


“Karla-chan! Time to come in!” called a voice from far off.


“sounds like you have to go” Maru said, setting the hardly breathing ninja back on her feat.


“Yeah, that was my tou-san” Karla said, panting some.


“well I don’t want you to worry him. You go on home” the busty babe said with a wave. Seeing she really wasn’t a threat, Karla smiled and leapt off into the forest. Maru smiled, but then her stomach growled and she cursed silently. “Why didn’t I ask her where the nearest place to get a burger was?!” she cried. “Screw it, I’ll go begging” she thought, darting off after Karla.


After an hour, Maru was dragging herself along the ground, her stomach growling loudly. “S-so hungry!!” she whined. Looking straight ahead, she saw a rather large house amongst the trees and bushes. “Karla’s home?” she wondered. Sneaking over to a window on the second floor, Maru climbed a tree and climbed out onto the limb to look into the window.


“Hmm...not much in here. A bed and some posters on the walls. Pretty normal” she thought. Looking up she saw another window and climbed up one more tree limb to see inside. Raising her head up to look, she came right into masked eye-contact with someone. “AAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!” Maru screamed, losing her grip on the tree and plummeting down three stories and impacting the ground with a hard thump.


“What was that?!”


“Who’s screaming?”


“Someone just saw Tobi getting undressed! Is Tobi still a good boy?!”


“Yes Tobi...you idiot...now put on some freakin’ pants!”


Maru laid on the ground, slowly slipping into a black out. She saw Karla run towards her with something that looked like a walking Venus fly trap follow behind her. A second later, the darkness came.


To be continued...
I blame :iconakatsukisaijou: for this! She got me hooked on the Atatsuki team, so alas....I'm writing a fan-fiction on it.

I will continue this, don't you worry~ :giggle:


No Tobis were harmed in the making of this chapter.
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lota355 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
lol XD wo maru. wow. XP lawlz. nice fic :)
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Maru-sha Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
YAAAY~! You're reading it! :boogie:
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lota355 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
lawlz XD yes. yes i am ^_^ lawlz. i gotz a question

lawlz. tell me. do i somewhat look like dei in this pic? :innocent: [link]
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Maru-sha Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww~!
A little!
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lota355 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
lol. awsome! :dummy: lol XD well, look at this pic and tell me what u think o3o

[link]
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Wolfie-wolfie-chan Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2009
Maru-chan...(you don't care if i call you that right?) not to be a bother but......could i ask you for a request?
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Maru-sha Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm?
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Wolfie-wolfie-chan Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2009
Well, I just made up My 2 favorite characters, so I was wondering if You could make a story about them and the akatsuki when their 14 *they join the akatsuki at 14* I could give you all the information!.......But you don't have to!
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Maru-sha Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmmm....sounds like something YOU must write ^^
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Wolfie-wolfie-chan Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2009
*pouts* but your so Good at writing! Oh and I'm almost done with your Zetsu picture! Sorry it's taking so long....My parents got divorced.....Waaaaaaaa! I just reminded my self of it!
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Maru-sha Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
*pet pet* There there...
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Wolfie-wolfie-chan Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2009
I finished the picture...And I drew one of Your OC....I don't think it looks like you though. But I'm gonna upload them both k?
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kisaita-baka Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008
finally! i read it!!!!!!
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:iconmaru-sha:
Maru-sha Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Yaaay! Like it?
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kisaita-baka Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008
like it? LOVE IT!!!
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Maru-sha Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Yaaaay~! On to chapter 2!
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kisaita-baka Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008
i promise i'll get to that asap, right now my mom wants me to take a bath, cuz i came home from soccer practice and my knees are muddy and my elbow is bleeding.... *sigh*
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Maru-sha Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
go bathe!!
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kisaita-baka Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008
lol, i'm done now ^-^
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Maru-sha Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
oh!
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KalineReine Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2008  Professional Writer
Hahaha! "Is Tobi still a good boy?!” Best line ever! :rofl: This was great, I like it already. Can't wait until she meets Itachi! XD That's gonna be great. *hurries off to read more*
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Maru-sha Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Tobi shall always be a good boy! :giggle:
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Maru-sha Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
:lmao:
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Magicians-Maiden Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
This is great! :D
The 'abyss' part made me giggle. :giggle:
I hope to see more of this in the (nearby) future! :D

Amy: WRITE MORE NOW!!!!
*SLAP*
Amy: T.T
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Maru-sha Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
The great abyss~!!
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RenjisBabySister Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008  Professional General Artist
OMFG! i love u! *super akatsuki ninja glomp* nyachu~
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Maru-sha Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
:bow:
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dieingcity Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
:clap: ahah its wonderful oh i can hardly wait to read more :clap: glad Tobi was not hurt heehee
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Maru-sha Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I just updated~
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dieingcity Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2008
i see and you added chp 3 i can hardly wait to read it
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Maru-sha Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Read~!!!
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dieingcity Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2008
i'm reading it right now
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Maru-sha Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Woooooot~!!
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dieingcity Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2008
i read it and left you a nice comment
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meL-xiNyi Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
yayyy continuing = AWESOME :D :D
great start :D
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Maru-sha Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
it's been updated~
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meL-xiNyi Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
yayyyy!@ i'll go read it now!! :)
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Maru-sha Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Yaaaay~!
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