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Commission #15: White Rabbit by Martith Commission #15: White Rabbit by Martith
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That was a real pleasure and fun to paint it, actually. I feel that I'm improving in many things. :shuffelin:

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YOKOKY Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2016  Professional General Artist
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TheSangson Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2016  Professional General Artist
EXPECTO PATRONUM!
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Martith Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Wingardium Leviosaaah ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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TheSangson Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2016  Professional General Artist
It's "Leviosaaah", not "Leviosaaah".
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Martith Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
aaah, Leviosaaah!

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ArcticIceWolf Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
so adorable! Makes me want some rabbits again...too bad pets are not allowed where I currently live :(
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Martith Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Ohh... You live in the dormitory or just the owner of the place you live in doesn't allow animals?
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ArcticIceWolf Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Second thing is true^^
But I used to live with bunnies for about 10 years :3
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Martith Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Ahhh that had to be awesome! :la: I had a dog for 15 years... She was a gem, and hilarious too ^^ here are some of her photos that we took in the first years of her life :D

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motherearth01 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Superb art work!
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Martith Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! ^^
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motherearth01 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
You're welcome!
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DaColdOne Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2016
Heh...I keep looking to see the Horsemen logo from "Now You See Me".

Oh well, at least the hat wasn't pulled out of the rabbit this time.  :-D
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Martith Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Haha omg :D well that rabbit can look cute and all, but it's pretty powerful from what I remember (in a card game) so who knows if he's not more like the rabbits from Monty Python and the Holy Grail :D French Guy 
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Martith Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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GrandeReveuse Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it Love 
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Martith Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Aww thanks! :happybounce:
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GrandeReveuse Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're very welcome Hug 
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suki42deathlake Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016   General Artist
so adorable! loving the colors you used ^^
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Martith Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! :3
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Uranus-seventhsun Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016
I like its befuddled expression and how the red is repeated throughout the piece.
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Martith Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much! :meow:
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Kurisunopatto Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016
And the commissioner was happy, I know that for a very close source ;3
Also, for some reason, loved the detail of the gif of the rabbit coming out the hat.
<3
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Martith Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
:love:
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Reborn-sama Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Ok at first i had quite some problems figuring out problems but after dragging it into photoshop and looking at it a little closer i found something you may could improve.
So first the positve things :) You definetly know about your values they work really well. You painted the rabbit almost white against the dark background. That just works perfectly. Also the rendering itself is really nice. The texture of the fur is really nice it looks really fluffy :D You also nailed some textures in the background example of the Red Cups :D But the other things could use some texture aswell the hat and the chest for example.

So now to the "bad" things. You did set your value really nicely, but you are actually doing the exact opposite with the color. Instead of going with more saturated colors on the focal point you went there really desaturated ( ok well it is a white rabbit but maybe you could get some saturation on it with a secondary light source). And you went with really saturated colors in the background. For example the Cups are like super saturated also the chest is quite saturated. Normally you want to avoid it since your eyes gets attracted by saturation. So maybe decreasing the saturation in the background and increasing it in the foreground clarifys the focal point even more.
The next point is composition. It is actually a little weird that the rabbit isnt exactly in the centre of the picture he is a little off which really destracts the viewers eye. Either place him right in the middle or go with the rule of thirds. So devide your Canvas into 9 rectangles and place him where the lines cross each other(if you use photoshop just press "C" and you have them there). The human brain feels attracted to things divided in thirds, so he will automatically look there.

And since you have a really strong top light maybe increasing the darkness of the castshadows would also make a little difference :) like underneath the gloves or the magic wand.

thats all i could figure out hope it helps :)
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Martith Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you for your nice and "bad" words. ;)

I get your point in all the advices and I'll surely pay attention to them in the next works, but I feel I can defend myself a little here :)

About the composition, in this specific commission card is designed in the way that the picture will be cropped in the top left, and the customer asked definitely for a rabbit in the middle. Also there is the shadow painted underneath gloves and magic wand, but because of the light coming exactly from the top I don't think that the shadows should be very big. That's why it's not super black and visible.

I agree with the colors rule. But again, in this specific commission the rabbit was supposed to be white and the magician's hat is usually black, plus the top light setting shadow on the already black item - all of that makes the central point almost with no color. That's why I decided to leave the background objects more colored because without it the painting would be absolutely dull, it would resemble sepia tones or something like that.

I didn't put textures on painting because that's not what customer asked for. I wanted to smuggle some, but they were too clearly visible. And he didn't pay me enough for detailed drawing, that's why I didn't paint them myself. (I have also detailed animal drawing slot, there things would look differently). But I believe he chose that one because the painting on a card will be, I don't know, like 5x10 cm? Maybe smaller. No visible details on such resolution :)
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Reborn-sama Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Student Digital Artist
I can definetly undertand your choice with the color. But for composition even if you had to place him in the middle he is still a little of to the right :D
but i guess that doesnt make a big change :)
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Martith Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
By the way, that's how the card looks: Card (I painted it in the way where it would be more to the top, but I'm not responsible for this customer's choice in placement xd)
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Reborn-sama Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Student Digital Artist
it definetly looks cool :) i like it a lto :3
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Martith Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! <3
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moonmute Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww~ The bunny looks so cute and fur looks fluffy >_<  Detail on the mask nicely done as well :D
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Martith Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you! :heart: Actually the bunny was supposed to be main focus, but I spent really much less time on him than on every other item there XD
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AllEagerThumbs Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Hobbyist
Wow, this is beautiful. The detailing on the mask is wonderful, as is the lighting with the flecks. As an owner of rabbits though, I can confirm that they are not that cute, they are actually evil.
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Martith Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you! Wow your rabbit is evil? Angels must be kind 
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AllEagerThumbs Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016  Hobbyist
I have 2 of them, this is a photo of them pretending to be nice fav.me/d9teetw I should really post up all the photos of the holes they have eaten in everything xD Some day they will make me a nice pair of slippers
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Martith Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Hah! Wow they really look just cute and nice xD
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AllEagerThumbs Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2016  Hobbyist
This is what "cute" did to my leather sofa sta.sh/02693uqdkunb
They have eaten large chunks of my house xD
Don't be fooled, they are nothing but teeth and evil.
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Martith Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Ouch! What a devils :O
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