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He Called My Name

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January 21, 2025

He Called My Name by MarquisAmonArt

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HE CALLED MY NAME



I woke up and did not see the sunlight

There were no stars

But

I woke

I looked at the horizon

and I saw The Suffering

My father was there waiting

as he called my name


I woke up and did not see your life

There were no signs of forgiveness inside of me

But

I woke

I saw the tablet of mans evil

I read the lies of human law

My father was there waiting

As He Called My name


I woke up and saw the vast void of emptiness

There were no signs of Prayer Inside

But

I woke

Black and cold in my birthing of death

I looked into the eyes of mankinds blaspheming

My father was there waiting

As he called my name




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@MarquisAmonArt This poem is haunting and deeply introspective, weaving themes of suffering, existential despair, and a search for meaning or redemption. The repetition of waking into darkness, the absence of light or forgiveness, and the presence of "The Suffering" and "the tablet of man's evil" create a sense of spiritual and emotional desolation. Yet, the recurring figure of the father calling the speaker’s name introduces a thread of hope or guidance, even in the midst of overwhelming emptiness.