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HE CALLED MY NAME
I woke up and did not see the sunlight
There were no stars
But
I woke
I looked at the horizon
and I saw The Suffering
My father was there waiting
as he called my name
I woke up and did not see your life
There were no signs of forgiveness inside of me
But
I woke
I saw the tablet of mans evil
I read the lies of human law
My father was there waiting
As He Called My name
I woke up and saw the vast void of emptiness
There were no signs of Prayer Inside
But
I woke
Black and cold in my birthing of death
I looked into the eyes of mankinds blaspheming
My father was there waiting
As he called my name
MarquisAmon@2025
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@MarquisAmonArt This poem is haunting and deeply introspective, weaving themes of suffering, existential despair, and a search for meaning or redemption. The repetition of waking into darkness, the absence of light or forgiveness, and the presence of "The Suffering" and "the tablet of man's evil" create a sense of spiritual and emotional desolation. Yet, the recurring figure of the father calling the speaker’s name introduces a thread of hope or guidance, even in the midst of overwhelming emptiness.