Tim's a great guy, Scott Williams too. Most inkers are, lol! I took a look at your page and would say, in general, you're a bit heavy handed. Some of the feathering looks too thick and doesn't always follow the form. Otherwise, clean and pretty on point. Keep at it!
Hmmm- that might be tough to show unless I did a demo or something, which probably won't ever happen. My best suggestion is to try taking a look at all your lines, and see if you can lighten (or thin) them all by half- literally go 50% lighter on everything, then check those results.