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JFK Assassination according to Donald Trump by marcgosselin JFK Assassination according to Donald Trump by marcgosselin
Another extraordinary EC with the imaginative Domenico :iconkeneru92:
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I love the concept here and think the core idea is really great :)
You sure have a talent for drawing and this is very evident.

I love the fact that your telling a non linear story with no dialogue on one page :)

A few things that could of just pushed this would be to consider the line weights.
I can see what you are trying to do, but there seems to be a flatness to the whole piece.

If you were to add a thicker line wight to the gun and the JFK in the bottom left hand corner it would make the gun pop a little more.

This could also be improved by changing the main pic of Jackie and the motorcade classic image.

As I said it looks really good and I can see the idea your going for, I would personally just add some extra line weights. After considering which element of the piece you want the viewer to see first.

You as an artist can guide the viewer around the page in a very subtle way by doing this.

Great idea, excellent draught skills, would love to see it pushed a little more :)
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A-Glass-Brightly Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2017  Professional Photographer
Such great themes filling up this work. The Mexican ISIS though :XD:
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marcgosselin Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
It's following the idea that Trump is blaming everything on the poor Mexicans, we are not comparing them to ISIS at all.
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A-Glass-Brightly Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2017  Professional Photographer
I assumed so, from the sombrero'd stereotype peering over the Trump wall. :lmao:
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marcgosselin Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
Exactly.
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Metal-Bender Featured By Owner Edited Nov 5, 2016   Photographer
Great work and collaboration Marc!
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marcgosselin Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you Peggy.
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Metal-Bender Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016   Photographer
You're very welcome Marc!:iconbutterflyplz:
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marcgosselin Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
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SorriAri Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2016
This was hilarious. I love the perfect depiction of Trump's demeanor, and this was a great, nonsensical elaboration of his ridiculousness. The skill on inking is amazing, and the creative imagery and placement of everything is fantastic. I love the content and I can appreciate the artistic value you two did. Great job for both of you!
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marcgosselin Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment.
I wish you would do a critique for us to counteract the first one we had.
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SorriAri Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016
Ah, no problem. You guys definitely deserved the praise. Oh, yeah? Is the first one still around?
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marcgosselin Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Yes, I let all critiques stand.
If you want we would appreciate one from you.
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SorriAri Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2016
That's awesome. I'd love to do another one.
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marcgosselin Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Please feel free, I appreciate your opinion.
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marcgosselin Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment.
I wish you would do a critique for us to counteract the first one we had.
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Keneru92 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you so much for your kindly words ! Really really glad you appreciate and spent your time on it :)
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SorriAri Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016
You're very welcome! You both did such a fantastic job, I had to say something to you guys.
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Keneru92 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
:)
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TriciaS Featured By Owner Edited Nov 4, 2016
Wow!!A fabulous,imaginative  collaboration..and such fantastic drawing.They do make an amazing concept together.It's certainly got a topical connection .I wish I was there....I wonder exactly what is being said...Something unimaginable  I should think from the look on his face!!
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marcgosselin Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
I guess he's blaming the Mexican culture for the assassination, more crazy redirect.
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TriciaS Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2016
That's a good thought!!!!!!.....I'm keeping my finger's crossed that the American people vote the right way!!!!

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marcgosselin Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
I think the whole world is hoping the American people do the right thing and vote for the other crook.
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TriciaS Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2016
Good news !!!!!Things seem better!!!......but are they??????
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marcgosselin Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Hilary has now been cleared of all wrong doing by the FBI, so let's hope that's enough.
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TriciaS Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2016
Don't know how anyone could look at and listen to Donald Trump and see him as a President!!!
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marcgosselin Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
I know, but he still manages to get almost half of the votes. Americans are really fucked in the head, at least half of them.
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bear48 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2016  Professional
very nice 
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marcgosselin Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2016  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks Bear.
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