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What I liked about this art was the unique color of turquoise combined with the light blue of the dress makes it pleasing to the eyes. The lady drawn on the center and the bird on the hand also shows that the artist have a good understanding of anatomy and proportions. The character also demonstrated a dynamic gesture on the top half, especially the right hand which showed good understanding of foreshortening.

One of the minor problems I noticed after looking for a while at the art is the outline of her left hand seems to be weak. Assuming the light source came from the bottom left corner of the photo the based on the values of the right hand, the shadow for the clothing wouldn't be as large as illustrated in the picture.

The entire character actually feels very 3D except the hair, the hairs seems flat compared to the rest of the body. Even though a shoulder line is shown it seems still feels flat, this might be because the hair doesn't look to be very deep in perspective at first, with the addition of a slightly long shoulder line it might have resulted in hair which felt less 3D and slightly flat.

Overall the anatomy and gesture of the piece was great. I would love to see another piece of this character with such unique hair colors.
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I believe this piece stands out for its color more than anything else. The blue of the seat behind her uses nice shadows to create the impression of rumpled fabric, and the detailed swirls of her blue-purple hair create a flowing impression. However, the detail in the piece is also quite great- you can see the different patterns of the lace, and the different feathers on the bird, not to mention the necklace. The shadows make a great realistic impression, whereas the hair borders on abstraction with the swirling of the colors. Improvements that could be made include possibly changing the face a bit, mostly putting the eyes a smidgen further down, and as other artists have said, changing the hand a bit. Overall, the piece really sets itself apart because of its beautiful use of color and abstraction as well as detail, and could be improved by making the hand a bit stronger. Well done.
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:iconrizhzy:
rizhzy Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2017  Student General Artist
Beautiful work!!!
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Marcellyne Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2017  Professional
Thanks! :aww:
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lunatic0-0 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
This is just lovely, so gorgeous to look at. I enjoy the colors. <3
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Milena-Zaremba Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ślicznie wygląda!
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Marcellyne Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016  Professional
Dziekuje! :D Zawsze milo to slyszec!
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:iconmilena-zaremba:
Milena-Zaremba Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
O, nigdy też za wiele takich opinii o tej pracy c;
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CutSleeve Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the llama! I really like this piece! It's beautiful. Since this is a very dark painting, the cool colors are perfect. I also love her hair! The lighter purple leans more toward pink and it's a nice contrast between the cooler purple. I totally love it.
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unnibabu Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
awesome <3
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LittleG042415 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
:smile:  :abduction:
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Zuzers Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow I love that. This colors are perfect! ;)
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mecengineer Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016
beautiful
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Lugia20711 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I like the detail used in this.
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athalyse Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2016
Geeeez! That lace! And dress, and hair, and pendant, and bird, and whole... "set" of the body,  her face, her eyes are just... Marvelous. <3

I ja naprawde przezylam szok, jak zrobilam zoom, jak nalezy :D
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AlexCN88 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love the right hand, dunno why
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Marcellyne Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2016  Professional
Probably because it came out the best XD
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athalyse Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2016
It's absolutely awesome. So... Sensual, somehow and graceful.
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HugATree4Me Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2016
Very lovely!
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Flame-TheCat Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Elegant, misterious and a little dark. I love it :3
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Marcellyne Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2016  Professional
Thank you so much :D
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:iconjbswif:
JBSWIF Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016
Very nice work
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:iconjdrainville:
jdrainville Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Love that hair! :D
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:iconmarcellyne:
Marcellyne Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2016  Professional
Lily's Rainbow Box 
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tubi4 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016
Looking Good :)
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Significant-Minutes Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016
Amazing work !!Her hair is wonderful ! I love coloring so much !! Is great :la:
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Marcellyne Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2016  Professional
Thank You! :nyancat: 
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squibblyquill Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016   General Artist
The foreground is more realistic, while the hair and face are more stylized. It creates an interesting division/warping of space.
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Marcellyne Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2016  Professional
Thanks for that :) I was trying to experiment, so that's why it all came out looking a bit different.
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Saphyrae Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Student Digital Artist
This is gorgeous! All the shading and folds are really well done :)
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Marcellyne Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2016  Professional
They took some effort and I had to correct it all the time, so I'm glad you like it :)
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Saphyrae Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2016  Student Digital Artist
You're very welcome! It's a very nice piece of art :)
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LaraHemille Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow!! Amazing as always! The folds of the fabrics are beautiful, the hair has movement and almost shine! I like the dynamic pose, too. And also, the color pallete you applied is simply awesome, the colors contrast together and give life to the drawing! You are one of my big inspirations Monique, I hope one day I can draw like you! :hug: Beautiful artwork!!
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Marcellyne Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2016  Professional
Thank you so much :D Draw a lot and you'll get as good as you'd like ;)
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LaraHemille Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome! Thank you!
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athalyse Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016
La la la la 

+fav 
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HADVAN Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
great work
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:iconmarcellyne:
Marcellyne Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Professional
Thanks ;]
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cthefish Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oooooh, I want that haaaaairrr <3 Drooling Smiley Emoticon/Avatar I love the details of the bird and her face as well!!
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Marcellyne Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Professional
I would like some like those, but right now mine are just blue.
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AurthorsGhost Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016   General Artist
Very fine work!!
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:iconmarcellyne:
Marcellyne Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Professional
Thank You :happybounce: 
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AurthorsGhost Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016   General Artist
You're most welcome!
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016
Great
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:iconmarcellyne:
Marcellyne Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Professional
Thanks :D
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BlueFireWolfStar Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful! :heart:
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Marcellyne Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Professional
Thank You :love:
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BlueFireWolfStar Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :huggle:
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