Mature Content
This content is intended for mature audiences
Log in to confirm your age

Deviation Actions

10 Comments
693 Views

Literature Text

This content is unavailable.
previous
next
first

Another boring chapter. Hopefully the next one will feature a new apperance from the Twister.

EDIT: Thanks to ~Rockerfox999 for pointing out I'd mixed up Jeego and Tengo!
Published:   |  Mature
© 2011 - 2021 Manga-in-a-Bottle
Comments10
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
FirefuryAmahira's avatar
It was not a boring chapter! The plot's thickened further, we got to see Jowd eat a cake to the face, and more character and plot development! So the blue guys are involved again, veeeeery intriguing!
Manga-in-a-Bottle's avatar
Yeah, well, I hope I can keep up the intriguge and avoid the fatiguge...
scytheskid's avatar
great chapter and i wonder if Mister Sith is work with the twister
Manga-in-a-Bottle's avatar
armor-dragon-knigth2's avatar
great work on this matle-san:D
armor-dragon-knigth2's avatar
soralover012's avatar
Crud! The return of the Blue foreigners!!! D: *hides behind Jowd*

This chapter really suprised me!!
Though the Cake scene was so funny XD
I wanna help protect Yomiel!! Though i would be suspious XD
Manga-in-a-Bottle's avatar
Well, I'm glad it wasn't boring or too unbeleiveable. The Twister will hopefully show up in the next chapter. Did I mention I'm kinda making things up as I go along? ^^; (Although I do have an overall plan in mind)
soralover012's avatar
Nope, it was perfect!
And Alright, i hope none of the cast gets hurt, otherwise they have to answer to me!! XD *Still thinks Yomiel is a Hero~
And Really? 0_0 i thought it was planned! That's suprised me! (Ah.. i see!)
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In