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Yeah... Sorry I took so long...
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buzzthebatgirl's avatar
I read this over on FanFiction.net was was really impressed, are you going to write more of this story?
Manga-in-a-Bottle's avatar
At the moment, no. I kinda wrote this fic while I was still high from having just played the game, and then all the energy petered out. I'm really quite disappointed in myself for not having kept with the fic like I should.
buzzthebatgirl's avatar
Don't be disappointed in yourself. *Hug*

It is better to abandon the story rather than grind through it when you are not feeling the love for it.

It is still a fantastic story, you did a really great job with it <3
EdgyisAwesome's avatar
So gripping... can't wait for the next chapter!
Manga-in-a-Bottle's avatar
Yeah, just gotta get off my fat @$$ and finish it ^^;
EdgyisAwesome's avatar
maybe I should do some work myself instead of just looking at other peoples'.
This is like the best fanfic I've read. Of anything. I'm not into horror but this is just amazing. Just one little gripe, maybe I'm remembering things wrong but didn't the Twister get the professor?
Manga-in-a-Bottle's avatar
joematrix01's avatar
it's like sissel wants to make it that all of that never happened, again.
he did the same with yomiel :D
Manga-in-a-Bottle's avatar
Well, they can't just let the Twister's ghost go around eating souls now, can they?
joematrix01's avatar
right but this time will be more hard to do, isn't it?
DiceAura273's avatar
I laughed at the Twister's reaction that Sesil was a cat... than he tried to eat him...
Manga-in-a-Bottle's avatar
I didn't intend it to be funny, but there you go... ^^;
DiceAura273's avatar
Once I realized Sessil was about to be eaten the mood went back to tense.
Manga-in-a-Bottle's avatar
Rollercoaster of emotions indeed :D
smonruiz's avatar
Poor Doc. taken hotage
Why I think that the kidnapper is possesed by the Twister and just one question which colour is the Twister's colour I mea Sissel Red
Missile Green
Yomiel Blue
Manga-in-a-Bottle's avatar
The Twister would be a dark purple, almost black
smonruiz's avatar
Thanks for the info I m goin to fav it now just one more thing could you post one twister drawing i m doing some ghost trick sprites so if you want i can make it
Manga-in-a-Bottle's avatar
I'm afraid you're going to have to wait awhile. One, I'm a lously artist and two, I've commisioned ~Rockerfox999 to do the artwork for me. She should have her take on the Twister up once we've figured out a way to transfer payment. Sorry.
smonruiz's avatar
Oh right but when she finishes I could do it? I mean the sprites
Manga-in-a-Bottle's avatar
Sure, I'd love to see fanart!
smonruiz's avatar
Thanks they can be based in 2 games you choose Mother 3 or Pokemon Red Blue Yellow I've done some of GT
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