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Just before I post it last year, me and :iconp-joart: went through three different versions of the first page.

Melody Pag 1 Testo Disc By P Joart-d70utdx by mandygirl78

Here's one where our credits was in the comic itself. I didn't like it, so I had it changed.

Melody Col 1 Grain By P Joart-d6y6jwx by mandygirl78

This version is suppose to look more like what a printed comic page would. It looks okay on paper, but not on a computer, IMHO.

Melody Let 1 By P Joart-d6zj4wv by mandygirl78

This version, the cartoon bubbles had too much whitespace, so I told her to remove some of it.










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creationstar Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That kinda sound like Jem and Jerrica.
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mandygirl78 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
How so?
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creationstar Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
On one episode, Rio and Jerrica were arguring about the setup of the lights and on another episode, Jem decided to setup the sound equipment since Rio's van died thanks to Riot.
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mandygirl78 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I remember the one when she argued with Rio, but I don't think I've seen the one when she had to set up the equipment herself.
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creationstar Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The second episode that I am talking about is "The Day the Music Died".
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mandygirl78 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Okay, I'll check it out.
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