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Twins
    Jax was walking through the Vera-37,  lifting the one front foot and the opposite hind foot at the same time, his tail were raised and gently moving from side to side to help him maintain his balance. Trailing behind him was two white pups, the rest of his litter had been sent back to their home world expect for these two.
    They won't be seeing their littermates again.
    The parent stopped and turned his head, letting out a chirrup towards his two pups that were playing.
    The two pups froze and turned their heads towards their parent before they broke apart, one climb over the other and running towards their parent with excited chirps. Jax nuzzled both of them, his green tongue sliding over to lick their heads before he raised his head and started to walk once more.
    The pups eagerly followed after their parent, weaving between his legs with high pitched yips and chirps.
    Until one tripped on
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A Gift # 2
    Kalene was walking through the Vera-37, looking for her boyfriend. She could easily use the Force to pinpoint his location but Faberians viewed using the Force who didn't have it as dishonorable.
    So here was Kalene looking for her wayward boyfriend.
    She could sense Jax in Kano's quarters, a slow smirk curled her full lips when she remembered that the Jha'dur had taken to following Kano around since they had first taken their relationship to the next step. Kalene wasn't worried about Kano's or Jat's safety, unlike the rest of his kind, Jax actually liked and torelated non-Force-sensitives.
    Kalene followed Jax's Force signature and sure enough, he was lying on the bed eyeballing Kano.
    "...Jax," The Jha'dur's ears twitched when he heard her voice but kept his eyes on Kano who was steadfastly ignoring the canid. "Kerrigan doesn't know that you are not sizing him up for your next meal."
    "How
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A Gift # 1
    "Commander." 
    Natasi stopped walking and looked over her shoulder to see Senya walking towards her, "Ah, Senya...what can I do for you? And I thought I told you to call me Natasi or Tasi."
    "My apologies but you are the leader of the Alliance and...." Senya noticed the look that Natasi was giving her and added. "I will be sure to call you by your name when we are alone."
    "I would appreciate that," Natasi said as she turns to face the older female. "Now what can I do for you, Senya?"
    "My son would like to talk to you, he would have sent a message but we both know you broke your datapad after the last message you had received and hadn't been able to replace it." Senya said.
    There were many on the Republic side who are wary of Natasi still, they don't know where she came from and she had shown to be quite knowledgeable with the Unknown Regions.
    Most didn't like her quick fo
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Party Crasher *Updated*
    Kestra stepped through the doors of the mansion of an Imperial Moff, she wore a black dress that had a low cut v-neckline and thin straps, criss cross straps in the back, showing off her back. The slim fitting floor length skirt on her long black dress creates a flattering silhouette and a thigh baring slit that flashes her tanned toned legs as she walked, and her black high heeled shoes clicked on the marble floor as she walked down the stairs. One side of her long black hair was pulled back from her face by a hair clip, it was silver with black precious stones set into it.
    She wore makeup, of course which made her look different, something that she needed to keep hidden so that she could gather the Intel that Kaden needed. According to her father, he had done a double take when he had first seen her mother without makeup. It had been during their very first meeting.
    Kestra always wondered how she'll meet her future hu
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Prologue
A/N: Please read the description after reading the prologue.
Star Wars: Origins: Cold War: Galaxy at War

Prologue

Faber was a Force-imbued planet located in the Faberian System in the Faberian Sector in the Unknown Regions. It was the home planet of the Faberians and possibly midi-chlorian life forms. Faber was a dense forested world.
    Faber's terrain was largely covered by massive, tightly-knit pine and redwood forests.  Faber also contained secluded lakes and mountain ranges. Faber’s low axial tilt and regular orbit of its gas giant primary helped ensure a comfortable climate. Faber was temperate and mild, with polar caps regulating the sea levels. Flora life included cambylictus trees and other large plants. The Faberian Royal City is the largest and only city on Faber and is the home of the Royal Family. 
    The Faberian Royal Palace was built in a large cluster of large redwood trees as
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The Clone Wars: Eternal Empire AU
The Clone Wars: Eternal Empire AU
The basic concept of this Alternate Universe (You guys know how much I love AUs) explores the possibilities of a key question: What if the Eternal Empire was still around? And Emperor Valkorion wasn't really 'killed' by his son like he had been in the game.
I'm still working on it but I am open for suggestions.
What I do have.
The Faberian Empire and the Eternal Empire have been at war for a few years now until it was leaked into the Known Regions despite the former Empire's attempt to keep it within the Unknown Regions where both Empires are from. Kalene's personal ship was struck by a ship of the Eternal Empire and she had crashed into the hangar bay of General Kenobi's destroyer, where she and Republic forces had a little stand off until the arrival of the Eternal fleet.
Kalene helped the remaining ships of Kenobi's fleet escape...
And that's it, that's all I have.
Oh and Kalene will meet Kano sometime during this new war because Kalo is my OTP
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Armor
    Keris was reading a datapad when he sensed Kalene's presence behind him but when he looked behind him, he didn't see her. He frowned, he could still sense her. Keris then noticed a shimmery figure standing in the corner, he slowly stood up from behind his desk as the figure turned off the cloaking device before she raised her arm that had the gauntlet knives and pulled up her mask, revealing that it was Kalene. "I'm going to lock that armor up!" Keris said as he sagged in relief. "I don't think the Saberians had you sneaking up on your siblings in mind when they gave you that armor."
    "....You do know that you are talking about the Saberians, right?"
    "...Yes, I just realized that was stupid of me to say that." Keris said as he turned off the datapad and walked around his desk. "The armor doesn't seem to have much but I like how your hair is styled like theirs."
    Her black 
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Unknown
    Obi-wan was staring at the woman who was seated across from him, she had cuffs on her wrists and was staring back at the Jedi with a detached look on her face. She had dark skin and gold eyes. She had a red board strip across her eyes, not on the eyebrows, with yellow stripe across cheekbones underneath the red strip. She had two white dots diagonally on her forehead, with white line between her eyebrows. The woman had white dots running along the top of her eyebrows and she had two small white lines on both cheekbones. She had a board white strip going diagonally down her bottom lip and to the bottom of her chin, she had five white dots running diagonally down the length of her neck. He saw that she had canines like a cat's, elongated and curving, ending in delicate, piercing points when she had bared her teeth when he had first entered and she has long nails that ended in points.
    She has long, thick white
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Exodus
Star Wars: Clone Wars: Yuuzhan Vong AU.
Exodus

    The Faberian Victory-class Cruiser, Redemption, trailed behind a massive fleets of ships that varied in size and designs. The largest cruisers were in the middle and were being protected by the destroyers that surrounded them. The cruisers in the middle had their civilians and the one in the center of them was the Royal Cruiser and it was the home of the Royal family. The ships acts as movable planets for the Faberians, they grow corps, have prey animals on the ship and even have predators aboard. In the largest ships are forests and lakes of fresh water. The ships are operated through the use of the force. All their plant life and creature life is force sensitive, plants can thrive by simply with the Faberians touching their leaves and enforcing their force ability into the plant. 
    The black hull of the ship glistened and reflected the light of the stars off t
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Literature
Let Your Hair Down
Keris enters the throne room of the Coruscant Palace and slows to a stop when he sees a rare sight: Kalene with her hair down and without the veil. He could see the hair pieces that made up her crown on the throne as well as the veil. Her long black hair fell down her back in soft waves. She wore a white long sleeved dress that had an open back , she was staring out the window.
She must have taken it off once she knew that she would not have any more visitors. 
"What's wrong?" Keris asked as he walked over to her, standing next to her. His tall frame towering over her smaller one, female Faberians weren't considered small but next to a male Faberian, they were petite. 
Kalene does a slow blink before she looked at him then she looked away as she said, "Just thinking how dead, cold this p
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Prologue
Star Wars: Origins: Clone Wars: Iron Hand
She was the Iron Hand of her people, she was their protector and provider. She will always be remembered as their Iron Hand Regnant Empress, a fair but strict ruler.
Prologue
    Faber was a Force-imbued planet located in the Faberian System in the Faberian Sector in the Unknown Regions. It was the home planet of the Faberians and possibly midi-chlorian life forms. Faber was a dense forested world.
    Faber's terrain was largely covered by massive, tightly-knit pine and redwood forests.  Faber also contained secluded lakes and mountain ranges. Faber’s low axial tilt and regular orbit of its gas giant primary helped ensure a comfortable climate. Faber was temperate and mild, with polar caps regulating the sea levels. Flora life included cambylictus tre
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The characters and their cultral are of my own creation because I like making my own race in the stories that I write.

And as my vod'ika :iconcorey-067: said: Ke nu'jurkadir sha Faber translation: Don't mess with Faber.

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Militia Report: Mandalorian Blood Guard
*Incoming Transmission: Code Clearance Laamyc Be'sol*
*Transmission Origin: Text file, offices of Field Marshal Tobbi Dala*
*Transmission Begins*
Name: 
Mando'ad Tal'aran, aka "Mandalorian Blood Guard"
Current Leader: Diwan Taz-Mahaki (Twi'lek Male)
Militia Type: Specialized Civilian Clan, Special Forces, Bodyguard
Founding
: 2990 BBY
Overall Training Level: Elite
Manpower: 600 Units (rough estimate), 370 in training (rough estimate)
Allegiance: True Mandalorian
Though a rare sight to offworlders, there are few sights more fearsome and awe-inspiring than the Mandalorian Blood Guard. Revered as some of Mandalore's most highly-trained and dangerous warriors, the Blood Guard is the pinnacle of all it means to be a Mandalorian: strength, honor, devotion, and lethality taken to an incredible degree. In this report, I will attempt to analyze, clarify, and streamline known information about Clan Tal
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Their ships are now all black, Qatai had changed the coloring when she realized that the red lining kind of made it like someone had painted a bull's eye on the ships.

So they left the ships as is, the shiny black alloy metal that is found on their planet and used for everything. The metal is stronger than any metal found in the Known Regions and the Faberians refuse to share it.

Faberian ships The Harvester, a massive cruiser. 
 The top ship is the starfighter, the second ship is bomber and the two bottom ones are the battle cruisers.
  and A troop dropship.
 and 
 are normal civilian ships.

Still debating about the look of the ships, I like the design of the Phantom from SWTOR and how the cockpit is positioned on it. So might have all the ships look like that, even the larger ones.

Faberian pilots are all female, especially the ones who pilot the starfighters, bombers and dropships. Kirren-ka Vernius (Tavali) is a starfighter pilot and the commander of Shadow Squadron. 

Pilots and  and  but the white is red. their uniform though Kirren-ka has a habit of using her helmet as a second weapon, she has been known to chuck it at an enemy.
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    Jax was walking through the Vera-37,  lifting the one front foot and the opposite hind foot at the same time, his tail were raised and gently moving from side to side to help him maintain his balance. Trailing behind him was two white pups, the rest of his litter had been sent back to their home world expect for these two.
    They won't be seeing their littermates again.
    The parent stopped and turned his head, letting out a chirrup towards his two pups that were playing.
    The two pups froze and turned their heads towards their parent before they broke apart, one climb over the other and running towards their parent with excited chirps. Jax nuzzled both of them, his green tongue sliding over to lick their heads before he raised his head and started to walk once more.
    The pups eagerly followed after their parent, weaving between his legs with high pitched yips and chirps.
    Until one tripped on his large feet and fell forward with a yelp, Jax immediately stopped and turned to nudge his snout against the pup's side, twrring softly. They still weren't used to their large feet or long tails, the pups were always either tripping over them or stepping on their tail. The pups had one large ear slightly bent while the other was fully erect, they were born with floppy ears. The older helped his pup back on his feet, the pup shook himself before he chirped up at his parent, his tail wagging so hard that his lower half also moved side to side.
    His red eyes were locked on his parent's familiar face, Jax bumped his muzzle against the pup's head before he repeated the action to his other pup.
    Jax straightened before he turned around and started to walk once more, the pups walking alongside him. They were looking for the female's mate and her pack mate, the pups still needed to get used to being handled by others and how to understand the two legged beings that they shared this ship with.
    Especially since they will be leaving this ship soon, they'll be adopted at least until the female found a proper home for them. She understood that not just anyone could adopt them, his pups may be not able to use the Force like their parent, it didn't mean that they weren't as deadly as their parent.
    Jax will miss his pups, he always does whenever they leave him but he will miss the twins even more. It had been a while since he had given birth to the pale ones.
    The pups stopped, ears perking a bit before they shot forward with excited barks.
    They had caught the scent of the female's mate.
    He sat down and watched as his pups, scurried into the room. He chittered in amusement when one of them lost traction on the floor and ran in place before he shot into the room.
    Yes, Jax will certainly miss the twins...
Twins
Just a short one shot of Jax and his two white pups.

Maybe the two pups are Tifar and Tobar from :iconslingblade87:'s SW: Graduation Pride and Hunter and Thief: Expecting, I'll leave it up to you, the readers!

I always enjoy writing from the Jha'dur's POV, it's really fun especially Jax.

In case you didn't know, Jha'durs don't have two separate genders and they can have babies without another Jha'dur. Jha'durs mostly all have a male mind frame but there are the rare few who have a female mind frame. And pups are born with their baby teeth, they have those in order to survive in the wilds of their home world or any world that they 'conquer'. Since other predators will eat Jha'dur pups, the white ones really need those teeth since they aren't Force-sensitive.

Faberian Empire belongs to me

Mentioned Kano and Jat belongs to :icondrakarra:
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White Jha'dur pup
This is an icon commission that I commissioned from :iconfargonon: who is simply wonderful and who actually draws very good canines! And this will be my new icon, of course, which is why I got it xD

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This is a white Jha'dur pup, isn't it adorable! I will be getting a full body commission done of this cute little guy eventually but let's hold you over with this lol. Both the normal dark colored Jha'durs and the albino one look the same, expect for the coloring and the fact the the albino ones are not Force-sensitive and therefore can be owned by anyone.

Just be ready to deal with a overzealous pup that will grow to full size in a month...adult Jha'durs are the size of Great Danes, so yeah pretty big canids who have no problem lying on top of you and sitting on your lab.

And yes, the pups do stick their tongues out and their ears do bend a bit...and they tend to trip on their paws and tails a lot, not get used to walking with those yet xD
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    Kalene was walking through the Vera-37, looking for her boyfriend. She could easily use the Force to pinpoint his location but Faberians viewed using the Force who didn't have it as dishonorable.
    So here was Kalene looking for her wayward boyfriend.
    She could sense Jax in Kano's quarters, a slow smirk curled her full lips when she remembered that the Jha'dur had taken to following Kano around since they had first taken their relationship to the next step. Kalene wasn't worried about Kano's or Jat's safety, unlike the rest of his kind, Jax actually liked and torelated non-Force-sensitives.
    Kalene followed Jax's Force signature and sure enough, he was lying on the bed eyeballing Kano.
    "...Jax," The Jha'dur's ears twitched when he heard her voice but kept his eyes on Kano who was steadfastly ignoring the canid. "Kerrigan doesn't know that you are not sizing him up for your next meal."
    "How can you tell?" Kano asked as he looked over at her.
    Kalen shrugged her shoulders and said, "How he feels mostly, he's calm when he's with you. With anyone else, they get the troll Jax or hunter Jax."
    Jax raised his head and yawned, revealing his sharp white teeth, neon green gums and his long neon green tongue that curled a bit before his closed his mouth with a click of his teeth. He rested his head on his foreleg and closed his eyes, the tip of his tail curling a bit before it relaxed completely.
    Kalene walked over to Kano and sat down next to him on the bed, "I have something for you." She reached into the sack that she had been carrying and pulled out a container. "It was hard for my weapon master's to make, they were not used to making such a thing." Kalene offered Kano the box and he took it from her, his expression curious. He removed the lid to reveal a blaster similar to the ones that Kalene uses but he could see a trigger and the rest of the items that one would see on a normal blaster.
    Kano picked up the blaster and looked it over, it had a nice weight and balance. And it was made from the same black shiny metal that was used for their armor, ships and weapons.
    He understood what this meant, it was a Faberian marriage courtship. Kalene had explained it to him during the start of their friendship when she wanted to explain to him why she couldn't give him a weapon or even armor.
    She hadn't wanted to seem heartless or even send him the wrong message for not getting him something that meant anything.
    And they were now in the part of their relationship were they wanted to be together for the rest of their lives.
    "It's resistant to lightsabers so someone using one can't chop it in half." Kalene explained. "Just don't go picking a fight with Dooku or even that droid General of his, okay?"
    "I won't unless they captured you, okay?"
    Kalene eyed him before she said, "Okay." She looked at Jax. "Watch Kerrigan if that should happen, Jax."
    Jax's ears twitched but that was all he did, Kalene sensed his acceptance of her order.
    "Thank you though, it's well made." Kano said before he pressed his lips against hers.
    Kalene smiled into the kiss and returned it but just as it started, it was rudely ended by Jax shoving himself between them and draping himself over their laps.
    "Jax!"
    "Get off, you mangy mutt!" Kano snapped. "Go bug Jat!"
    Jax raised his head and looked at Kano before he got off their laps and left the room, the couple watched him leave before they looked at each other.
    "....Jat's going to be pissed."
    "What else is new?" Kano asked. "At least Jax left." He wrapped his arm around her and placed the blaster back in the container and on the floor. "I have to properly thank you for my gift."
    Kalene smiled widely and said, "I thought you already thanked me."
    "Oh, that doesn't count because Jax interrupted."
    Kalene gave a breathless laugh before they kissed again....
A Gift # 2
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!!!!

I had to do Kalo! 

Faberian metal is resistant to lightsabers, Kano is lucky that Kalene isn't the type to show xD

Who needs a kid when you have a Jha'dur? Jax only does the mood ruining when he wants to be a brat xD lucky for Kano he knows how to fix said ruined mood ;D by sending Jax to harass Jat xD the Duros wasn't amused.

The gift of armor or a weapon symbolizes that a Faberian or the other person cares about your safety and want you to return to them alive.

Faberian Empire belongs to me

Kano and mentioned Jat belongs to :icondrakarra:
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    "Commander." 
    Natasi stopped walking and looked over her shoulder to see Senya walking towards her, "Ah, Senya...what can I do for you? And I thought I told you to call me Natasi or Tasi."
    "My apologies but you are the leader of the Alliance and...." Senya noticed the look that Natasi was giving her and added. "I will be sure to call you by your name when we are alone."
    "I would appreciate that," Natasi said as she turns to face the older female. "Now what can I do for you, Senya?"
    "My son would like to talk to you, he would have sent a message but we both know you broke your datapad after the last message you had received and hadn't been able to replace it." Senya said.
    There were many on the Republic side who are wary of Natasi still, they don't know where she came from and she had shown to be quite knowledgeable with the Unknown Regions.
    Most didn't like her quick forgiveness of Arcann too.
    "Did he tell you why he wanted to talk to me?"
    "A mother does not pry." Senya said with a mysterious smile.
    Natasi narrowed her brown eyes in response, she didn't believe that. She had seen the looks that Senya had been giving her and Arcann whenever they have been together and talking but doesn't say anything about the smile instead she asked, "Where is he?"
    Senya tells her where he is before she takes her leave, Natasi watches her walk away before she goes to where Arcann is at. The former Emperor was standing near the edge of the cliff looking at the scenery below him.
    It was still weird to see him without the mask on but she liked being able to see his face completely, the facial scars didn't bother her at all. Female Faberians found scars to be attractive.
    And she slammed a wall over her attraction towards him, he didn't need that and she had a feeling that Senya knew about her true and hidden feelings towards her son.
    The looks that the older female had been throwing her way hadn't exactly been subtle and her amusement through the Force whenever Natasi ignored said looks. 
    "I never thought I would never stand on Odessen as anything but a conqueror. So much has changed."
    Natasi came to stand next to him, looking up at him and said, "Your mother said you wanted to talk. Sorry about not getting a replacement datapad but I figured that Lana and Theron would enjoy playing messengers."
    Arcann turned to face her as he said, "Lana seemed to be starting to get annoyed with it while Theron seemed to be enjoying telling most of the people who called you that you are very busy. Anyways, I have something for you. A gift. When I was young, the Knights of Zakuul taught me how to forge my own armor." He pulled out a piece of armor, looking down at it. Natasi kept her expression calm and neutral, and she kept a firm control over her emotions. Arcann didn't know that it was considered the start of a marriage courtship to give your future spouse an armor or weapon. And Natasi never really explained about her people's cultural either, not that she was forgetful and lazy but because soon one one will remember the Faberian Empire. "I've worked on this piece since I arrived on Odessen." Then Arcann handed it to her and Natasi took it from him, she glanced at it briefly before her eyes met his once more. "I want you to have it." Natasi looked at it before she looked back up at him. "If I am ever unable to fight by your side, I can still ensure you're protected." 
    Natasi looked at the piece again, turning it over and taking in the craftsmanship, "I can't believe you made this. It's incredible." She only seen this level of craftsmanship back on Faber.
    She had her blasters and lightsaber pike hidden in her quarters.
    "It's the least I can do for someone who has give me so much," Arcann said as he looked down, moving with his hands as he talked. Natasi can sense his honesty but she could sense the shame and self-hatred coming from him. "There's...something else I need to say. Until now, I only felt hatred for others--especially for you. But you showed compassion I didn't deserve, and eliminated the darkness threatening to consume me. Everything I am is because of you. And I'll spend a lifetime thanking you for it."
    Natasi smiled fondly at him, she lowered her wall and finally allowed him to sense her feelings of devotion and affection for him, "Seeing you happy is enough for me. I care about you, Arcann."
    She could sense his surprise when he had sensed the truth behind her words, sensed her true emotions.
    "Is that...really how you feel? After everything we've gone through?" He asked before he turned around and walked away from her, Natasi turned to face his back. She understood the worry, he had tried to kill her many times and had kept her in carbonite for five years too. But Natasi had forgive him, she could sense that her mother, cousin and aunt were still alive. Older now but still alive. "In the time we've spent together, I've come to admire you. Your strength, your wisdom, your courage. I never thought you would see me as anything but a former enemy."
    "Arcann...." Natasi said as she walked towards him, he turned to face her.
    Natasi never thought herself as wise, strong and courageous yes but not wise. Yet so many people are following her, listening to her as if she was wise.
    Was this what it mean to lead? Did her mother ever feel this way. 
        "But what you've said gives me hope," Arcann said. "When I see you, I feel something I never knew possible. I want to stay by your side through whatever comes. I've done terrible things, Commander. But if you can accept me, I want to become someone you deserve."
    "Two things, Arcann, thing one: it's Natasi or Tasi when we are alone." Natasi said as she held up two fingers and ticked them off. "Second thing, I accept every part of you--the good and the bad."
    Arcann smiled and said, "I hoped I would hear those words from you."
    The two stepped closer to each other, staring at each other but unsure about what to do next.
    "This is...unfamiliar territory for me. I'm not sure how to proceed."
    Natasi gave a small chuckle and said, "Kissing me would be a good start."
    "That I can do." Arcann said before he shot forward and wrapped his flesh arm around Natasi's waist before he pulled her towards him, his lips pressing against hers.
    Natasi respond back with the same amount of passion, letting her emotions flow through the forming bond.
    The kiss ended as quickly as it started and the two pulled away, looking at each other and smiling.
    "I can't say what the future will bring. But whatever challenge comes, we'll face it together." Arcann said as he takes her hands in his, she felt both flesh and metal against her own flesh. 
    "I hope you're ready for a whole lot of challenges." Natasi said with a smile.
    Arcann chuckled and said, "I am and I know that you are." He releases her hands and turns to face the scenery before them.
    Natasi smirked and said, as she crossed her arms over her armored chest and cocked her hip to the side before she too turned to face the same way, she turned her head towards him, "Hey, a challenge every now and again makes life fun. Granted most of the Jedi don't like some of my more...aggressive actions." They hadn't like it when she had killed Sareesh but Faberians didn't take betrayal very well.
    Not that everyone seemed to realize what she was, Faberians can easily blend in with normal humans and her mother had issued an exodus of all Faberian forces from the Known Regions.
    It's time for the Faberian Empire to no longer be a Republic ally, there'll be a joint mindwipe to clean everyone's memories of them. They didn't have to worry about any records about them, the Sacking of Coruscant had seen to that.
    Natasi knew that she would have to tell Arcann and his mother especially when she returns to her home system, it'll soon be time for her to take the throne. 
    She was hesitant to ask Arcann to come with her, he had just returned to his mother and had just started to repair their relationship. He had saved his mother's life and she had saved his.
    Natasi didn't want to tear them apart.
    "What's wrong, Natasi?"
    Natasi blinked in surprise and she pulls away from her thoughts, "Just thinking about what had happened during my time here...pretty exciting and I thought finding Revan and freeing him would be the most exciting thing in my life...of course, then he went crazy on everyone and tried to kill us all." She frowned. "So many exciting things happened to me but I have to say that our little war had been the most exciting."
    "Despite what I have done to you?"
    "You honestly think that you're the first one to try to kill me? That many times? Love, I hate to tell you this but you're not the first or last." Natasi said with a smile, her tone and emotions light and teasing. "Though you were the first to put me in carbonite for five years so that's special...didn't like the carbonite poisoning though, I could have done without that."
    "I can see why most of your people find you weird." Arcann said, fondly.
    "That's one way to put it." Natasi said with a laugh. "I take after my mother in personality, but I also have some of my father's personality."
    "You never speak of your parents, what are they like?"
    "My mother is wise beyond her years and quite cunning," Natasi said. "As for my father, he had died a month before I was born so I never knew him but my mother told me that I have some of his personality in me."
    "I am sorry about your father."
    Natasi shrugged her shoulders and said, her Force signature sad yet at peace, "It's hard to miss someone that you never knew but my mother always made sure that I never doubted that I was loved and she has told me about him too."
    Arcann took her hands into his flesh one, giving it a squeeze causing Natasi to look at him as he said, "Your father would be proud of you."
    "Thank you, I like to think that too." Natasi said as she rested her head against his bicep, radiating devotion and love in the Force.
    She felt him wrap his arm around her waist, he was also radiating devotion and love in the Force as well.
A Gift # 1
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!!!!!!

I did Kalo last year so it's Natasi/Arcann this year....I have no idea what their ship name should be xD

I expanded and changed the romance scene with Arcann from the game, this scene will show up again in the main story :P

The gift of armor or a weapon symbolizes that a Faberian or the other person carries about your safety and wants you to return to them alive.

Faberian Empire belongs to me
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Thanks for the fave, glad you enjoyed the concept.
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And thanks for all the other faves as well, glad you like the Daedra.
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You're welcome and you know me, I love it when people make their own Star Wars races. It means that I'm not the only one who did it xD
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So, how are you doing? I recently started shipping Rey with Finn from the Star Wars sequels.
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