mandk

While your technique in line and color are well balanced with your style in drawing, the aspect that impacted me the most was your perspective. I can tell that you worked very hard to give a sense of the viewer looking from below, your anatomy appears to be working from two different perspectives. while her legs look like they are from the below perspective, the torso is from more of a direct view, giving her a torso length for that perspective. When looking from below, the body is lengthened closer to the viewer, and is shortened as it moves away. This can be remedied by shortening her torso and facing the same way her legs are.
Also keep in mind that not all of the figure is viewable from dramatic angles such as these. certain parts will begin to overlap one another, such as the legs overlapping the waist, and the waist overlapping the chest.
For some visuals and professional tips, i would use this site [link]
or use posemaniacs.com, which you can angle poses in any angle you want, which can be a lot of help.
good luck on your future work!

yeah man, growing up is hard.
and PAYING TAXES. what is up with that?

thanks!

thanks! i hope you have a happy new year as well! C:

i wish i could fave this a kabillion times, its so good.
my favorite part is the harsh lighting behind the wings. *______*