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These are in no particular order.
Please find your entry and review the results.Ask any questions you have in the comments.Please use mentions to address any specific judges in your comments.
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Total 48/50
Written Portion
Grammar: 5/5
Structure: 4/5
Logical: 5/5
Plausible: 5/5
Into the Heart: 4/5
MamaLantiis's Thoughts... There was more about her feelings on the actual event at hand than on the entire war plus event. Though your story made me laugh quite a few times! Well done!
Visual Art
Overall: 5/5
Detail: 5/5
Creativity: 5/5
Nitpicky Stuff: 5/5
Bonus: 5/5
Sir-Frog 's Thoughts... Great idea! And WIN execution is WIN!
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Total 50/50
Written Portion
Grammar: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
Logical: 5/5
Plausible: 5/5
Into the Heart: 5/5
MamaLantiis's Thoughts... I have so many feels right now...
Visual Art
Overall: 5/5
Detail: 5/5
Creativity: 5/5
Nitpicky Stuff: 5/5
Bonus: 5/5
Sir-Frog 's Thoughts... I have to stop looking at Gabi's entries first... I stare far too long...
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Total 47/50
Written Portion
Grammar: 4/5
Structure: 4/5
Logical: 5/5
Plausible: 5/5
Into the Heart: 4/5
MamaLantiis's Thoughts... I would have like to see a bit more focus on emotions about the battle too, but overall a really great story and insight into your senshi!
Visual Art
Overall: 5/5
Detail: 5/5
Creativity: 5/5
Nitpicky Stuff: 5/5
Bonus: 5/5
Sir-Frog 's Thoughts... Lovely! She's beautiful!
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Total 42/50
Written Portion
Grammar: 3/5
Structure: 3/5
Logical: 4/5
Plausible: 5/5
Into the Heart: 4/5
MamaLantiis's Thoughts... The story was good though with how it was structured and some of the errors, it was a bit hard to read. I ended up having to read it on the artwork and cursive font is hard for me. Double-check with a program like Word to make sure your grammar, punctuation and spelling is okay :3
Visual Art
Overall: 4/5
Detail: 5/5
Creativity: 5/5
Nitpicky Stuff: 4/5
Bonus: 5/5
Sir-Frog 's Thoughts... A few anatomy problems and a couple type-o's. Great idea showing this kind of look-back in meme/story format.
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Total 48/50
Written Portion
Grammar: 4/5
Structure: 5/5
Logical: 5/5
Plausible: 5/5
Into the Heart: 5/5
MamaLantiis's Thoughts... So sweet! Brought a few tears to my eyes - and such an interesting reaction to what has happened thus far!
Visual Art
Overall: 4/5
Detail: 5/5
Creativity: 5/5
Nitpicky Stuff: 3/5
Bonus: 5/5
Sir-Frog 's Thoughts... Another lovely entry! I hope you work more on your backgrounds. They're wonderful when dome completely.
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Total 41/50
Written Portion
Grammar: 5/5
Structure: 4/5
Logical: 5/5
Plausible: 5/5
Into the Heart: 5/5
Visual Art
Overall: 3/5
Detail: 3/5
Creativity: 4/5
Nitpicky Stuff: 4/5
Bonus: 3/5
MamaLantiis's Thoughts... That story was EPIC. You have improved SO FREAKING MUCH WITH YOUR WRITING OMG! Even your art has improved though not at the speed of your writing. Visually, you do still need work on your anatomy and lining. However, I am loving the boldness of your colors this round, the attempts at posing you made (seriously, fantastic job with that as previous entry have not been so dynamic), and your attempt at a background too (instead of just using a stock one). Generally speaking, this is your most bad-ass entry thus far and was a pleasure to view and judge!
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Written Portion
Grammar: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
Logical: 5/5
Plausible: 5/5
Into the Heart: 5/5
MamaLantiis's Thoughts... OMG //sobshysterically
Visual Art
Overall: 5/5
Detail: 5/5
Creativity: 5/5
Nitpicky Stuff: 5/5
Bonus: 5/5
Sir-Frog 's Thoughts... STUNNING WORK!
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A HUGE ROUND OF APPLAUSE FOR THIS ROUND'S TOP SCORERS: GrimStarling & ExploringReal !
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