I like it a lot, but the fact that the tail is depicted as looping counter-clockwise near her body but ending with a clockwise curve on the left makes it look like there's an awkward turn at the very end or maybe that's the tip of someone else's tail.
If her hips were turned the other direction and the tail always looped clockwise, I think it would get rid of that.
Otherwise I really like the layout and especially the use of the clouds. The starfish on the rock is also a very nice touch. The panel breaking effects are inspired and work well, although the bottom border line looks thinner and weaker than the others.