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HBD Pluvias by maitha-girl HBD Pluvias by maitha-girl
happy birthday to the lovely ~ :iconpluvias: ~ =Pluvias ~ :heart:

this is her OC Ami

i hope u like it ^^
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maitha-girl Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
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This is my first time someone wrote for me a critique >w<

Yep your right about the negatives . I have to focus even more in these points.
:iconmanlytearsplz:

p.s: You weren't harsh at all, and thank you for not being one. ^^



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RaspberryJupiter Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
critique~
***WARING.. The Critiques I write are not here to offend you, so don't go blocking me or hiding my comment. Making constructive critiques need you to be honest
Good things~
~the eyes' colouring is nice
~Her hair has a good amount of shading
~Her faded jeans have a nice look
Bad things~
~Her pose seems similar to your other works of art, and that will make your drawings look boring (so experiment with poses!)
~Her mouth seems the same as this: [link] and this: [link]
~The anatomy seems a bit off for her torso.
~The floor/background looks rushed (slow down, it is not a race)

If you need anymore critiques, feel free to ask!
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TaliaTheFoxkeh Featured By Owner May 23, 2012
Omg soo CUTE! :meow:
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maitha-girl Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
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Pluvias Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awwwww, thanks love :iconlovbunplz:
that's so sweet of you :iconaawplz:

thank you very much :'3 :heart:
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maitha-girl Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
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