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WaCK foOl: 2

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STARING...
Tristepin!
Az.
Miranda and Corbeau Noir from Episode three,
And those... one things with the yellow straw hats... from episode five. (found on youtube)

Anyone like the symbolism with the colors? XD
One more page to color, then it's off to drawing more!

ps: Miranda and Corbeau Noir are my favorites next to Tristepin! XD They are just so cool.

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Art (c) me
Character (c) Ankama
THe making fun of names idea and the nick names themselves (c) ~Gidorah2001


PSS: The Tristepin screaming pannel is missing something I think... any sugestions?
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Drena-The-Eliatrope's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This is absolutely fantastic! The artwork really speaks to me. You obviously thought this through, and while the characters may not be original, this comic sure is! The funny insults and Percedal's reaction to them I thought were priceless. Then when little Az cheeps.... awww!! The drawing technique is very good, but there wasn't any shading (I have a thing about shading). Overall, the comic was funny, well directed, and of course, insulting the funniest character I have ever seen, other than tiny, adorable, pun-making Yugo! I am glad you are accepting Critiques and I am happy to tell people what I think. Please do many more of these. I happily await more!!
mangaholic13's avatar
Az so didn't deserve that.
neonwolfgirl's avatar
Here may be a little suggestion for you at the second to last panel with him screaming at the tofu, there could be flames in the back to emphasize his anger and all of his explosion.
Maiden-Chynna's avatar
There isn't much open space behind him how ever. might look cluttered.
neonwolfgirl's avatar
gdpr-5164181's avatar
I think it would be best if you had pen pressure and shadows.
Maiden-Chynna's avatar
It would. But I didn't have a good program for inking with pen pressures when I used this.

And coloring is already a pain enough, I would never think of shadowing. Cause I'm a lazy American.
boogiepoeta's avatar
Depressed wood?! XD
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vexorii's avatar
depressed wood ~ Ha ! good one
aww poor EmoStick toh ;P
Zabchan's avatar
oh god, depressed wood....is that anything like blue balls?
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Maiden-Chynna's avatar
Here comes an argument i've already lost... TT-TT
nevan1's avatar
soo sweet XD
the way he is in this pic totally reminds me of Buttlord GT. specifically Glutes. :V
Maiden-Chynna's avatar
I have no idea what any of those are but thanks XD
isnotnamed's avatar
look it's sobbingbush!I agree Tristepin is a much better name than Sadlygrove
Maiden-Chynna's avatar
Tristepin's avatar
The jokes get old after a while. T_T
Maiden-Chynna's avatar
Whatcha talkin' about!? THey hardly been goin' on! 8P
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Eevee-Magican's avatar
oh poor depressed bamboo...
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