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:iconstarblazekirara:
StarBlazeKirara Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Can I ask your input on something, nothing urgent
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MagicalCrystalWings Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sure thing!
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StarBlazeKirara Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
It's more of input, I've got this oc I adopted and I really want to put him in my rw fanfic, but I can't figure out how to fit him in, one idea of some of the gang finding him beaten up and he joins them, this is him starblazekirara.deviantart.com…
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MagicalCrystalWings Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Which story? I'm trying to find it in your gallery. It also depends on how many OCs you have in the story right now.
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StarBlazeKirara Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Oh, it's my 'Hidden Four' story, there only two chapters up right now, but I'm going to go back and edit them when I can
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MagicalCrystalWings Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I will have to read them. But if you already have 3+ OCs in a story already, you should add anymore unless they are a key plot character. Don't add more characters to a story then need be or else you're going to take away from the canon universe.
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StarBlazeKirara Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Well one other is added later, but dies off later too
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MagicalCrystalWings Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Still sounds like you might have a lot of characters. Even if you do kill off a character.

That's what made it a little hard to read for Illness. There were a lot of characters in some of the scenes and it was hard to get a good feel for the characters because there were no bios.
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