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MagicalCrystalWings

https://www.patreon.com/Wingseon
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Artist // Hobbyist // Traditional Art
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Biting Pear of Salamanca: Participated in April Fools' Day 2017
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My Bio
Just another cosplay loving artist just trying to get by in life.

www.patreon.com/Wingseon

Favourite Movies
Anything with a good plot, blood and gore, along with good humor
Favourite TV Shows
Same thing with my movies
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Anything that I can understand the words and beautiful instrumental
Favourite Books
Too many to list
Favourite Writers
Washington Irving.
Favourite Games
Misao, To The Moon, and Cards Against Humanity.
Favourite Gaming Platform
PC
Tools of the Trade
Pencil, colored pencils, paint, Sai, pastels, charcoal
Other Interests
Cooking, Roleplaying, and spending time with my nieces.

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Llama: Llamas are awesome!
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Comments

:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

First off, those legs on Akira. I wanna touch and snuggle since they look so smooooooth! Super jelly.

The folds and the shading look really great.The one thing that is kind of throwing me off is the folds on the lower part of Iruka's vest. It almost looks like his torso is a little off from his legs. Also, his pointer finger on his left hand looks off as well. Maybe try looking in a mirror and point to try and get the correct shape because, perspective can be jerking hoe. =/ His little finger on his right hand seems to be off as well. Mirror, looking at your own hand, or stealing the hand of your grandfather will be helpful for that as well. All in all, hands are jerks but we kind of need them to do things. >_> Like touch Akira's butt.

The one thing that I would fix on Akira is her back. Give it just a little bit of a curve instead of making it straight will make her look a little softer and will look like it is curving properly into her shoulders and neck.

But all in all, this turned out really great!
IruAki - Yin and Yang
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I think that you have a really great start on this. Maybe make her arms a little more equal in thickness along with her legs, they just look a little off because of the gap between her legs. Continuing with her arms, the upper part of her right arm looks a little weird around the bending area. Just like the next person, boobs are fun to draw. Just bring her boobs down a little, unless that's one amazing push up armor piece (which, I want). And just continue working on hands. Hopefully this will help and I know that this will turn out great with the adjustments!! Good luck! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart"/>
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