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This is one that starts out confusing. Last comic Dazzle is sleeping and by Illy, and now suddenly Diamond has him again, he's awake, and we're at recess. It isn't until panel 4 that you actually let us know we're in a recess, which does help to explain the shift, but I thought I missed a comic because of the sudden change in scenery and Diamond suddenly having Dazzle again. I guess since Illy hasn't actually won the case yet Diamond can still hold onto Dazzle during a recess, but I think we could have used a transition panel here.
We could have used a little clarification, even if it was just a word of two of narration saying "At recess."
I'm guessing you mirror Diamond at points because her loose bit of hair keeps switching from the left side of her mane from the right side.
Welp... Diamond has finally broken. You can take away her cutie mark, her voice, her tiara, and now even her stubborn pride, but you can't take away her kitty.
Silver's face. O_O "Wait, Diamond has a soul? She's capable of actual emotion??? My whole life is a lie!"
I feel like my confusion and distraction from trying to figure out if I missed something kept me from becoming sympathetic at Diamond's breakdown, which is a shame, since it feels like it's one of her defining moments of the series.
We could have used a little clarification, even if it was just a word of two of narration saying "At recess."
I'm guessing you mirror Diamond at points because her loose bit of hair keeps switching from the left side of her mane from the right side.
Welp... Diamond has finally broken. You can take away her cutie mark, her voice, her tiara, and now even her stubborn pride, but you can't take away her kitty.
Silver's face. O_O "Wait, Diamond has a soul? She's capable of actual emotion??? My whole life is a lie!"
I feel like my confusion and distraction from trying to figure out if I missed something kept me from becoming sympathetic at Diamond's breakdown, which is a shame, since it feels like it's one of her defining moments of the series.