Diamond and Dazzle: Charm

Hey there! I saw this over at <img class="avatar group" width="100" height="50" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/p/r/p…" alt="" title="ProjectComment" /> and decided to leave my thoughts on this amusing comic!

I have to commend you on making an engaging and pretty hilarious dialogueless comic. I am not very familiar with MLP and the other cat characters (are they yours? Or part of MLP as well?) yet I was able to follow along with this story similar to how one would follow along with a Tom & Jerry cartoon (often very dialogueless as well). Though the plot is familiar to me due to my enjoyment of slapstick humor, I still found this adorable and engaging.

Since this is based off of the Flash-based animation style of MLP, I found the artwork to fit into the universe for the most part; clean vector like lines; gradient lighting for the day time and sunsets, all this fits into the overall animation scheme. However, I will say that I found the grey cat (Dazzle? I think?) to look slightly out of the world. The very dark outline and his eyes make him seem like he is from a different show. Also in some of the panels, he seems a bit off model, probably due to the fact that he does look so uniquely different compared with the other characters.

Also; where did that giant roast turkey come from?! It suddenly appeared as soon as the pasta was finished! That is less of a technical issue and more of a plot logic to me. Again, this does not take away from the story, but I have to admit to coming back to that panel and wondering how did that suddenly appear.

These were really my only sticking points; you have made a really neat, amusing, short episode of their hijinks which I really enjoyed! Awesome work and I hope my critique was helpful <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>.